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The new one sounds more like people speak today.
The choice of the word female in the original feels intentional. Using a more clinical term like that instead of “girl” or “woman“ can change the whole feel of the sentence.
Hundreds of changes made to latest editions of Roald Dahl's books
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Do you have any more details about that book (author, etc)? I really want to read it, but searching libgen returned nothing.
It's The Transgender-Industrial Complex by Scott Howard, published by Antelope Hill Publishing.
https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/the-transgender-industrial-...
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#223Earlier quoted context omitted.
The technical/organizational details around implementation of this and how it came to be realized would probably also be interesting to a readership as nerdy as hn. I think I’ve seen a few of these posts but can’t seem to remember them.
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The book is available for free 3-day shipping at Barnes and Noble and it’s one of the “most censored books of the last 30 years?” Sorry that your favorite online retailer decided not to carry the latest ethnonationalist anti-semitic screed.
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Turns out a person being something you dislike has no direct bearing on the quality of their writing and storytelling. If you can’t appreciate the latter on account of the former, that’s your problem.
> Turns out a person being something you dislike has no direct bearing on the quality of their writing and storytelling. It turns out that this has a direct bearing on my perception of his writing. For example i don't have to pay for his stories, if the author doesn't like me for the color of my skin or for belonging to people that the author happens to dislike. I am also allowed to say that these are very objectiona…
If you don't have any friends who have parents who are morally reprehensible, then you don't have many friends.
Re: Hundreds of changes made to latest editions of Roald Dahl's books
#225Earlier quoted context omitted.
Do you have any more details about that book (author, etc)? I really want to read it, but searching libgen returned nothing.
It's The Transgender-Industrial Complex by Scott Howard, published by Antelope Hill Publishing.
Re: Hundreds of changes made to latest editions of Roald Dahl's books
#226Of every change the ones to Augustus Gloop not being called "enormously fat" and instead being called "enormous" are the most jarring as his story is a moral parable about the dangers of gluttony. Even if you think such moral parables are wrong, the phrasing change isn't simply just aesthetic, it's fundamentally changing the story's narrative.
What was the intent of this change? "Enormously fat" is a subset of "fat". Ostensibly, this would insult more people since there are more fat people than there are enormously fat people.
To be specific - they edited things like “But Augustus was deaf to everything except the call of his enormous stomach” to “But Augustus was ignoring everything”. It's not just the description of Augustus they toned down, they even literally removed lines from the book which explains he was motivated by hunger.
Re: Hundreds of changes made to latest editions of Roald Dahl's books
#227Earlier quoted context omitted.
The technical/organizational details around implementation of this and how it came to be realized would probably also be interesting to a readership as nerdy as hn. I think I’ve seen a few of these posts but can’t seem to remember them.
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Re: Hundreds of changes made to latest editions of Roald Dahl's books
#228Of every change the ones to Augustus Gloop not being called "enormously fat" and instead being called "enormous" are the most jarring as his story is a moral parable about the dangers of gluttony. Even if you think such moral parables are wrong, the phrasing change isn't simply just aesthetic, it's fundamentally changing the story's narrative.
What was the intent of this change? "Enormously fat" is a subset of "fat". Ostensibly, this would insult more people since there are more fat people than there are enormously fat people.
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#229I'd be interested in hearing the most credible/reputable sources speaking out in favor of these changes. I've exclusively seen commentators dunking on this (rightfully so), across the political spectrum. To be clear: I'm wondering if we can find specific people speaking up for this, not an analysis of whose side of the culture war is most culpable for it.
The most cogent analysis I've seen is that the changes were made by the owners of the books in order to sell more books.