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Re: What makes a great opening line?

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"The moon blew up without warning and for no apparent reason." I think Seveneves was one of Stephenson's weaker novels overall, but you can't deny it has a killer opening line.

I rather liked the first part (2 parts?). But then there was a wildly improbable transition to the last part that I didn't find terribly interesting.

Re: What makes a great opening line?

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What makes a great opening line? A great rest-of-the-story. Nobody praises the opening line of a story that they otherwise think is rather boring.

I don't know, I couldn't get through a chapter of Anna Karenina but it's still a great opening line. “Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.”

Keep going. It’s an amazing story.

Re: What makes a great opening line?

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What makes a great opening line? A great rest-of-the-story. Nobody praises the opening line of a story that they otherwise think is rather boring.

    LIFE IN this society being, at best, an utter bore
    and no aspect of society being at all relevant to
    women, there remains to civic-minded, responsible,
    thrill-seeking females only to overthrow the
    government, eliminate the money system, institute
    complete automation and destroy the male sex.
Valerie Solanas' The SCUM Manifesto has a great opening, and tbf sustains the pace and spice for a few pages, but subsequently becomes almost unreadable.

Re: What makes a great opening line?

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"The moon blew up without warning and for no apparent reason." I think Seveneves was one of Stephenson's weaker novels overall, but you can't deny it has a killer opening line.

I rather liked the first part (2 parts?). But then there was a wildly improbable transition to the last part that I didn't find terribly interesting.

Stephenson is an excellent author of the first thirds of novels.
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