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Re: What makes a great opening line?

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I'm glad this essay mentioned the opening line of 1984. It's one of my favorites: "It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen."

I looked up some of the author's writings. She had an interesting opening line in one of her short stories, entitled "Endangered":[1]

"The artists were kept in cages."

[1] https://americanshortfiction.org/endangered

Re: What makes a great opening line?

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What makes a great opening line? A great rest-of-the-story. Nobody praises the opening line of a story that they otherwise think is rather boring.

I don't know, I couldn't get through a chapter of Anna Karenina but it's still a great opening line.

“Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.”

Re: What makes a great opening line?

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What makes a great opening line? A great rest-of-the-story. Nobody praises the opening line of a story that they otherwise think is rather boring.

I'm not sure that's true. Certainly there are a number of "classics," including some like A Tale of Two Cities that are probably not the author's best work, which most people would probably find boring with memorable openings.
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