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It's still difficult to parse. If I replace the parts that I don't understand with variables, I get > The move from a in which is understood to structure brought the question of temporality into the thinking of structure, and marked a shift from a form of that takes as theoretical objects to one in which the insights into the inaugurate a renewed conception of hegemony as bound up with the . Consider all the differen…
Check my interpretation above (I did 3 levels, expanded simplified, quite simplified, and explain-it-to-me-like-I'm-18). It is indeed tedious writing, but her audience isn't the general public, is other academics and people who get off with this sort of think and have read 100+ other books on the same subjects. So, it's more like Dijkstra writing something to Knuth (and laying the technical language thick to save tim…
The point I was attempting to make was that even if you replace the variables with anything that results in an intelligible sentence, it's still going to be difficult to read. Regardless of whether you understand the terminology. The structure of the sentence itself is contributing to the difficulty in interpretation. Could time have been saved by writing it in this style? Sure, but it takes the readers' attention away from the actual argument and forces them to spend extra effort on interpreting the sentence structure.
I see this as a problem with academic (and even popular) writing in general. It's far from being exclusive to either Judith Butler or philosophy.