Earlier quoted context omitted.
All the essay shows is that your representation of his beliefs is obviously false.
Damore's essay seems to be a kind of Rorschach test. People sympathetic to Damore's views (or at least, to his approach to debate) seem to trust that he's arguing in good faith. People strongly opposed to his views seem to think he's being disingenuous.
0: (posted here regularly) https://slatestarcodex.com/2018/10/30/sort-by-controversial/