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Re: Writing one sentence per line

#51
When I write for myself, it's all over the place. Mostly it's short phrases, unordered lists and the odd diagram, followed by lines of --- to separate thought arenas. All of these are fragments of ideas that I feel will probably be important to the finished piece. Usually about half of them actually are.

I just continue writing down thoughts as they occur, any time they happen during the day or during periods of concentration on the piece itself. If the current thought is not an extension of the last thing I wrote, I make a new line and start the new thought.

Here's a small section of draft notes for a technical article that I never published:

    Streaming only for top level args, not deeply nested.... ?
    - With set of files, need lots of streams of data.
    -- How to get metadata when ordering not guaranteed?

    ------------------------------------

    Is there a way to evaluate, send data from smallest piece to biggest piece?
    - Walk the tree, assign weights to branches?

    If a hierarchy contains multiple big data pieces, how to tell the receiving function?

    Some method to pump in top level args X items at a time?
    - 1 item at a time for non-array, x bytes at a time for array

    -----------------------------------
Every so often I'll draw another line and summarize everything in a way that succinctly discusses what I'm writing about in note form. Then I draw another line and start writing notes again.

Eventually, the summary notes start to feel solid in my mind, at which point I turn them into prose and then start embedding my notes between the paragraphs, turning them into sentences only once I feel I know where they should go in the overall piece. Once the notes finally disappear from the prose, I have my first draft.

Re: Writing one sentence per line

#52
post #11

Such, errr, ‘giants’ as BBC evidently already adhere to this advice, and others follow in their step. Though I suspect that the motivation is different.

I was going to say this. New reporting has denigrated to two sentence paragraphs. It is ridiculous.

> denigrated

I don't think that's the word you're looking for =)

(Since we're on the topic of words in this thread.)

Re: Writing one sentence per line

#53
Slightly off topic, but a pet peeve of mine is how you don't get a real line break in markdown when you insert a newline. Sometime I want a line break without a vertical apace for a new paragraph, I can't be the only one here! I know I can normally just add a br tag, but that looks nasty when you read it as plain text.

Re: Writing one sentence per line

#54

This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences.…

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Re: Writing one sentence per line

#56

Slightly off topic, but a pet peeve of mine is how you don't get a real line break in markdown when you insert a newline. Sometime I want a line break without a vertical apace for a new paragraph, I can't be the only one here! I know I can normally just add a br tag, but that looks nasty when you read it as plain text.

Markdown allows you to inline HTML, so just use the
tag for a newline.

Edit: Oh come now... Editing your post to also say what I replied, then voting me down is poor sportsmanship old chap.

Re: Writing one sentence per line

#57

I approach this by separating writing from editing. Just keep writing, ignore the typos, self-censorship or formatting and keep moving. So, I've build myself an app to make that easier. Essentially, it's just a more stupid version of a text box. It's free, it's private, and it's meant to put you in the state of flow. I've been using it every day for the past 3 years or so and I know that some people find it useful to…

I like it!

Re: Writing one sentence per line

#58

I approach this by separating writing from editing. Just keep writing, ignore the typos, self-censorship or formatting and keep moving. So, I've build myself an app to make that easier. Essentially, it's just a more stupid version of a text box. It's free, it's private, and it's meant to put you in the state of flow. I've been using it every day for the past 3 years or so and I know that some people find it useful to…

I just gave this a whirl and I wanted to let you know it's very fun! For anyone else that wants to give the demo a shot, here's the direct link:

https://write.sonnet.io/

Re: Writing one sentence per line

#59

This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences.…

That's beautiful.

To be fair, and are we not all about being fair around here, he explicitly states:

> Not publishing one sentence per line, no. Write like this for your eyes only.

On the other hand, I find it hard to believe that there should be no spillage between how you write and how you publish. For example, I found "How to live" unreadable partly because of what I suspect this style of writing did to the published product.

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