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Writing one sentence per line

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Re: Writing one sentence per line

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This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences.…

"We need to vary the lengths of our sentences. Sometimes short. Sometimes long."

Re: Writing one sentence per line

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Maybe this is the right thread to ask for help:

I am looking for resources on the technical aspects of creative writing. Like this post. Or as mentioned below, on using semantic line breaks https://sembr.org/

I am trying to improve my creative writing style but most what I find on Google is about the creative aspect and not about the technical aspect.

Re: Writing one sentence per line

#28

I approach this by separating writing from editing. Just keep writing, ignore the typos, self-censorship or formatting and keep moving. So, I've build myself an app to make that easier. Essentially, it's just a more stupid version of a text box. It's free, it's private, and it's meant to put you in the state of flow. I've been using it every day for the past 3 years or so and I know that some people find it useful to…

Similar idea I made a few years ago. A text editor with no editing allowed and lets you export to Word/MD/HTML for later editing

https://first-draft.netlify.app

Re: Writing one sentence per line

#29

I approach this by separating writing from editing. Just keep writing, ignore the typos, self-censorship or formatting and keep moving. So, I've build myself an app to make that easier. Essentially, it's just a more stupid version of a text box. It's free, it's private, and it's meant to put you in the state of flow. I've been using it every day for the past 3 years or so and I know that some people find it useful to…

>I approach this by separating writing from editing. Just keep writing, ignore the typos, self-censorship or formatting and keep moving.

You've (re)discovered the old adage: write drunk, edit sober.

Re: Writing one sentence per line

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I write one sentence per line as well, but use line wrapping to make it more readable during writing. Reading long sentences on a single line is unpleasant imho.

I‘ll try switching from line wrap to full display to get a better picture of the overall structure.

If the structure is easy to recognize I would probably prefer a simple model that tells me a good line length for the current line I‘m in, e.g. a simple writing plugin for the editor of choice.

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