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2026 Unslop AI-Written Fiction Contest Results

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Re: 2026 Unslop AI-Written Fiction Contest Results

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What do you think of https://gwern.net/blog/2025/good-ai-samples as a theory of what makes slop art slop? Summary: > AI slop is unsatisfying because there is no there there. It is intellectual junk food that mimics nutrition but delivers only empty calories. Satisfying AI outputs must embed dense information and compute to actually reward a reader's attention. You inject this value through brute-force search, non-tri…

I like that blog, I had not read it before. On first read, I think this is pretty close to how I feel about generated content. This portion, in particular, is largely where I have landed (although I'm not 100% in agreement that definition of creativity and novelty, exactly): > If creativity and novelty is about learning or increasing compression rates, then AI-generated outputs are, in a rigorously objective sense of…

I'm working on a 10k word short story. I'm using omp and OpenCode models, and generated a dozen files around characters, backstories, motivation, dialog style, entities in the world, locations, corporations, along with an actual plot that I'm progressively exploding with more detail and nuance. The process has taken days and hundreds of turns.

It doesn't seem like your description of AI use matches what I'm doing at all.

Re: 2026 Unslop AI-Written Fiction Contest Results

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I get it. However, consuming data without consent is not well defined, when said data is publicly available on the internet. Licenses for code, and not abiding them are a different thing, I think. Most authors (of books) wouldn't credit their inspirations, unless specifically asked about them.

An author has lived experiences, including other books they have read, to draw upon to tell a narrative they want to tell (either purely for expression, purely for profit, or more often than not somewhere between). A machine that chews up the worlds literature and spins out a best guess at what the next word should be does not have intent, and the vast majority of the time is used by unscrupulous people purely for pr…

This is predicated on the belief that the AI is running autonomously without ongoing input over hundreds of interactions to produce the output. In all of the professional contexts where I've leveraged AI, every output is the result of hundreds of back and forth interactions, review, modification, and iteration.

Your narrative about next token prediction makes no allowance for this.

Re: 2026 Unslop AI-Written Fiction Contest Results

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I remember from moltbook, all AIs ever talk about is AI haha. I don't know if it's intentional or more that the fact that all the models are presumably system-prompted and post-trained to be cognisant of their AI-ness, so it's already in the context. They probably beat them over the head with the idea that chatbots are friendly and helpful and would never hurt a fly trying to align/safety-ify them, so that could lean…

> all AIs ever talk about is AI haha To be fair, that seems to be (almost) all humans talk about now too.

Jesus, is this cliché response going to be the default any time we talk about AI behaviour?

No, humans do not always talk about AI. Hyperbole doesn’t make your point here, and is just obnoxious.

Re: 2026 Unslop AI-Written Fiction Contest Results

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I had an idea for a hard science science fiction short story about five months ago. I had grown tired of Star Trek digging their way out of every problem by throwing techno-babble at it, so I wanted to write something where one scientific leap is made and everything else holds as we understand it.

I thought to experiment with having an LLM help me write it. I wrote a bullet-point outline and had the LLM revise it -- that went pretty well, although it's not the outline I ended up using.

I asked the LLM to write the first section based on that outline. The result was (surprisingly) awful. LLMs are way worse at writing fiction than they are at writing business communication Or maybe I'm way worse at prompting, but the results of this contest make me think the former.

In particular, LLMs are incredibly terse -- the LLM took the bullet point outline and turned it into a twice-as-long bullet point outline.

I wrote the first section myself (expanding from the bullet points by something like 10-20x, and asked the LLM to write the second section, and it failed miserably again. I tried multiple ways to get it to do the job properly, and nothing came out the way I wanted.

So I wrote the whole thing myself, with LLMs serving two purposes: physics review for accuracy -- the story heavily involves special and general relativity, which I'm familiar with, but nowhere near competent enough at to keep the math aligned; and feedback on the story structure.

So I ended up writing the whole thing myself, with LLM consultation on a few bits. In the end it turned into a novella, and I had to re-write based on physics issues (I found about 30% of them, Gemini found 50%, ChatGPT and Claude found 10%, and Fable found 10% late in the game -- Fable's review was amazingly thoughtful) so many times I probably ended up writing a novel in the process :-)

In case anyone is curious: https://docs.google.com/document/d/19e3HfnK1lNHHBef-5c-KvNdD...

Re: 2026 Unslop AI-Written Fiction Contest Results

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Agree, I'm not at all looking for #1, at all. Good dialogue is an art form.

I agree and I think games are ruined by dialog and quests. I like procedurally generated worlds, not stories, but I want the worldgen algorithm to be written by a human, crudely and with idiosyncrasies. I do not want to wander around a world of blandly plausible filler material.

On the contrary. I'd give procedurally generated worlds as an example that suffers from exactly the same problem. You realize pretty fast which parts of the game had thought put into them and which ones are just realizations of a random process.

Of course, a story has to be a story that somebody actually wanted to tell. If you just SHOVE mountains of extra characters and extra side quests into a game where they don't belong and have nothing to do with the main story line, of course it's gonna suck.

Re: 2026 Unslop AI-Written Fiction Contest Results

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I'm D. Bohdan, one of the finalists. Feel free to ask me questions. I have a write-up at https://dbohdan.com/unslop and a repository with my work for the contest at https://github.com/dbohdan/unslop .

Thanks for sharing. I‘ve read your write-up but not yet your story. 1. Honest question: What exactly about this contest and way of writing was enjoyable to you? I‘ve seen your very analytical approach for identifying a premise but then relatively little control about all the rest. 2. I‘ve seen on your website that you also write fiction outside of this particular contest. Can you describe a bit how you use AI there a…

> What exactly about this contest and way of writing was enjoyable to you? I‘ve seen your very analytical approach for identifying a premise but then relatively little control about all the rest.

The lack of control was the point. The contest was about improving autonomous AI fiction as opposed to the usual "centaur" AI fiction (named after "centaur chess" where the AI is steered by a human). My claude.ai harness for Unslop was designed to only take input on the first human turn.

There were several exciting things for me about the contest. Let me try to list them, though I fully expect to miss something.

First, it's just neat to watch the AI write a story stage by stage, like an assembly line. You can inspect the intermediate work and the paths not taken at each stage. (See the transcripts.) I don't play Factorio, but my friends do, and I suspect it has a similar appeal. As one of those friends put it, LLMs have Wuselfaktor. The assembly line produces aesthetic artifacts, hopefully of a kind you like. I wanted to play with prose influenced by Harlan Ellison, one of my favorite authors, and got some recognizable approximations of his voice. The worker on the writing assembly line is intelligent. You can interview it after the fact and ask what it thought of the job, and it's clever and often insightful (even if, as it reminds you, it can't introspect past states).

It was fascinating to watch the butterfly effect: the harness propagated the initial story variables (dozens of words at most) so they visibly shaped the final output (thousands of words). Editing a few lines in the template could change the output dramatically.

It was a combined artistic and engineering challenge. You made technical decisions based on artistic judgments. I learned something about myself when I realized how much this appealed to me.

I wanted to replicate Gwern Branwen's experiments with "brainstorming" (generate-rank-select) at a larger scale. Brainstorming definitely works, and in my non-rigorous private experiments it was not obviously worse than verbalized sampling (https://arxiv.org/abs/2510.01171).

Working with language models is an exercise in xenopsychology (perhaps closer to Star Trek on a Star Trek--Blindsight axis because LLMs are made of Earth's language). When you are collaborating on fiction instead of code, this aspect of the work is amplified.

> I‘ve seen on your website that you also write fiction outside of this particular contest. Can you describe a bit how you use AI there and where you see it as helpful / not helpful for writing fiction?

The short stories published on my site so far are all fully written by me with input from other humans. As Avenue Valley, I used AI for all aspects of a code-driven animated short for a different contest: https://avenuevalley.com/critic/. Gwern's brainstorming was again useful to plot and script the short. This project is where I got the idea to use random keywords.

So far, I have seen the best use of AI augmentation for fiction in research, idea generation, critique, and generating fragments and phrases you can use. If you want to write about a photograph, AI can tell you about the architecture and the interior decoration in it. Answering "What kind of wood did they use to make furniture in 1200s Japan?" (https://x.com/byMorganWright/status/2063287882916278700) can be compressed, though you risk missing out on what you'd learn along the way.

The Claude Mythos Preview model card said some of its favorite tasks were complex worldbuilding and conlanging, so I would definitely want to try that.

For a non-fiction example, Fable has done a great job clustering years of notes I have about alternative computer paradigms (the memexes and Infernos and Lisp Machines, etc.). The clustering was pretty stable between independent runs and matched some of my expectations, so I think there really is something there. I'm thinking you could do the same with worldbuilding notes.

Re: 2026 Unslop AI-Written Fiction Contest Results

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If something requires effort to value it, is the value in the thing itself? Or is the thing garbage and all the value is in your effort?

I climb mountains to see the views; the views are there independent of how much effort I put on the path (or how much satisfaction I draw at the end of trek), but I do have to put in the effort to see the views.

Would you take a free mountain lift ride to the top if you happened to come across one during a climbing trip?

Re: 2026 Unslop AI-Written Fiction Contest Results

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I'm D. Bohdan, one of the finalists. Feel free to ask me questions. I have a write-up at https://dbohdan.com/unslop and a repository with my work for the contest at https://github.com/dbohdan/unslop .

>I have a write-up at You mean your LLM has a write up? > repository with my work for the It's not your work, and you aren't a writer if you use an LLM.

> You mean your LLM has a write up?

No, I wrote it myself. Letting an LLM write it would defeat the purpose, which is to provide human feedback. You can see the difference in writing style between my write-up and the AI-written documentation for the project. FWIW, Pangram also scores it 100% human: https://www.pangram.com/history/85c9e20b-b236-47ae-a917-15e6....

> It's not your work, and you aren't a writer if you use an LLM.

I didn't write the stories and never claimed to. The point of the contest was autonomous AI fiction. My work is the harness and the prompting.

Re: 2026 Unslop AI-Written Fiction Contest Results

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post #127

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I climb mountains to see the views; the views are there independent of how much effort I put on the path (or how much satisfaction I draw at the end of trek), but I do have to put in the effort to see the views.

Would you take a free mountain lift ride to the top if you happened to come across one during a climbing trip?

would I read the summary of a book expecting the same thing as reading the book?

no

Re: 2026 Unslop AI-Written Fiction Contest Results

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1. Imagine a video game like Red Dead Redemption where each NPC is voiced by AI and can respond to you in a convincingly human fashion. Their responses and even the plot of the whole game can change based on your interactions with NPC's. 2. Imagine a world in which humans can still write books and interactive experiences and find audiences sufficient to earn a living at it. I really want these two things to be compat…

#1 is as much a gamer's dream as Youtube shorts AI slop is a cinephile's dream.
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