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What I think about when I edit (2019)

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Re: What I think about when I edit (2019)

#101

I would add eliminating future tense. There's very few times when future tense is actually required. It's one of my pet peeves when docs say something like "Click X. This will open a prompt ..." when it can say "Click x. This opens a prompt ..."

Yes. The user is living (i.e. working) in the moment, and so should your text.

Re: What I think about when I edit (2019)

#102
post #43

One of my pet peeves while reading technical documents is coming across acronyms that have not been introduced to the reader yet. When this happens over and over again across several documents of a project and people working on the project change over years, sometimes we end up in a situation where nobody can tell anymore what a particular acronym expands to. In fact, more than once, I have seen the bizarre situation…

HTML has an entire tag for this. There is no good reason not to define those every time they appear.

Re: What I think about when I edit (2019)

#103

I was a doc reviewer in my corporate past life and found myself using many of these guidelines. I’d add one more: don’t use different names for the same thing. Many of the docs I reviewed had multiple authors and quite often they used slightly different terminology. This really complicated things for readers. I eventually realised there was a meta-principle here: in tech writing, the reader should never have to resol…

Huge vendors make this mistake across their entire system. Like data bricks with Workflows and Jobs (same thing). Super irritating, friggin’ pick one.

Re: What I think about when I edit (2019)

#104
post #77

Hello everyone! This is my post! I'm flattered and honored that it resonated with many of you. Since I wrote that post, I followed my curiosity to become a software engineer myself. After doing that work for a few years, I've found myself missing working in a more writing-heavy role. If you're looking for an excellent technical writer, developer advocate, or another role that blends communication expertise and techni…

I really got a lot out of the article. I think it will help my write more succinctly and clearly and to be better understood.

One question: after writing the sentence “I really got a lot out of the article.”, I wondered: is this extraneous? Is this clear? Am I saying precisely what I mean? And I think, yes, I meant exactly what I said, and I went into detail in the following sentence. I am just curious what you think.

Re: What I think about when I edit (2019)

#105

> Whitespace is key for technical documentation but can also be used to great effect in blog posts, emails, and elsewhere. It’s hard for people to read long paragraphs, especially on a computer screen. They will zone out. 100%. The explanation (?) I first heard which helped me 'get' this whitespace principle was along the lines of > Have you reached a page in a book with no paragraph breaks and thought 'oh no'?

You know, I kind of feel this way about code too. Sometimes people don’t put in a lot of blank lines to break things up and I find that a little harder to read and a bit more intimidating than reading with a few blank lines between concepts/actions. In fact, I was thinking after I read the article, maybe many of these principles apply to writing maintainable code too.

Re: What I think about when I edit (2019)

#106
post #77

Hello everyone! This is my post! I'm flattered and honored that it resonated with many of you. Since I wrote that post, I followed my curiosity to become a software engineer myself. After doing that work for a few years, I've found myself missing working in a more writing-heavy role. If you're looking for an excellent technical writer, developer advocate, or another role that blends communication expertise and techni…

I really got a lot out of the article. I think it will help my write more succinctly and clearly and to be better understood. One question: after writing the sentence “I really got a lot out of the article.”, I wondered: is this extraneous? Is this clear? Am I saying precisely what I mean? And I think, yes, I meant exactly what I said, and I went into detail in the following sentence. I am just curious what you think…

Your first paragraph is clear, indeed the first sentence is the gist, the second explains it in more detail. The second paragraph -- the question and own answer -- seems a bit superfluous to me.

Re: What I think about when I edit (2019)

#107
post #43

One of my pet peeves while reading technical documents is coming across acronyms that have not been introduced to the reader yet. When this happens over and over again across several documents of a project and people working on the project change over years, sometimes we end up in a situation where nobody can tell anymore what a particular acronym expands to. In fact, more than once, I have seen the bizarre situation…

A glossary is the most important document ANY project should have and maintain. Everything else is secondary.

I find glossaries quite often not very useful because they tend to get copy/pasted across documents and the acronyms are often just expanded without giving the correct meaning in the context of that document. I'd rather have it fully spelled at first usage, with the acronym in brackets. This enforces a more natural order of writing and reading the document and provides a better context.

Re: What I think about when I edit (2019)

#108
post #43

One of my pet peeves while reading technical documents is coming across acronyms that have not been introduced to the reader yet. When this happens over and over again across several documents of a project and people working on the project change over years, sometimes we end up in a situation where nobody can tell anymore what a particular acronym expands to. In fact, more than once, I have seen the bizarre situation…

This is a related to my number one problem with technical writing or text books: forward references.

"Let's talk all about a topic we will define three chapters from now"

Learning about things with undefined terms, concepts and acronyms is much harder and may require multiple passes over the material.

It's a hard part of writing a linear book about a topic that's probably a graph, but good writers manage it. Bad writers just leave their readers confused.

Re: What I think about when I edit (2019)

#109
post #43

One of my pet peeves while reading technical documents is coming across acronyms that have not been introduced to the reader yet. When this happens over and over again across several documents of a project and people working on the project change over years, sometimes we end up in a situation where nobody can tell anymore what a particular acronym expands to. In fact, more than once, I have seen the bizarre situation…

I think the google guide to technical writing recommends to write out acronyms once per chapter/section.

Should always be on first use, of course.

Re: What I think about when I edit (2019)

#110
post #77

Hello everyone! This is my post! I'm flattered and honored that it resonated with many of you. Since I wrote that post, I followed my curiosity to become a software engineer myself. After doing that work for a few years, I've found myself missing working in a more writing-heavy role. If you're looking for an excellent technical writer, developer advocate, or another role that blends communication expertise and techni…

I really got a lot out of the article. I think it will help my write more succinctly and clearly and to be better understood. One question: after writing the sentence “I really got a lot out of the article.”, I wondered: is this extraneous? Is this clear? Am I saying precisely what I mean? And I think, yes, I meant exactly what I said, and I went into detail in the following sentence. I am just curious what you think…

I am not the author, and am sharing feedback because you asked with honest curiosity.

Your writing is not clear to me. Using the word “really” is extraneous. Using “I think” is also extraneous; I assumed these are your thoughts.

As the author notes, replace “it” with “the article”, or better yet a specific quote or idea distilled from the article.

Helped “my write” should be helped “me write”. You use two -ly adverbs, which could be avoided by restructuring the sentence.

You also have a list of two (succinct and clear) and then a single item (better understood). Consider breaking these two thoughts into separate sentences.

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