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My First Job Interview was with a Billionaire
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#13Brilliant story. That being said, Page should learn to be a better writer. Take this, for example: As for my right ear, I was born deaf in it lol. This was not a fun experience to say the least. Being born deaf in one ear is rarely a cause for "laughing out loud," and the "lol" adds nothing to the first sentence. "To say the least" is a cliché and should be eliminated. Anyone could be guilty of these writing sins and…
I agree. I thought the writing was really poor and very hard to follow. One moment he's talking about losing his hearing, then his vision and then having Epstein Barr. That being said, it seems like a pretty interesting story, good for him for fighting through his problems!
Given the informal context, reminiscing about first job interviews with friends, I feel that the author wanted to share that setting with us as readers.
It may not have been the same decision you would have made, but take it as a chance to learn a new perspective rather than opening with hard criticisms.
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#14Nice story!
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#15As Mark Twain said in a letter, "if I had more time, I would have written a shorter letter".
Still a long way to go for me but I can see my pitches are becoming better. I happy to start with a long winded sentence now and then gradually cut it down.
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#16Brilliant story. That being said, Page should learn to be a better writer. Take this, for example: As for my right ear, I was born deaf in it lol. This was not a fun experience to say the least. Being born deaf in one ear is rarely a cause for "laughing out loud," and the "lol" adds nothing to the first sentence. "To say the least" is a cliché and should be eliminated. Anyone could be guilty of these writing sins and…
I think it was quite clearly intended as sarcasm.
the "lol" adds nothing to the first sentence
I can agree with you there though, but mostly because I don't like "lol" as a word and not because of the use of sarcasm.
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#17It's hard to craft a viable proposition if you don't know your target, but simply knowing your target doesn't mean you have a viable proposition. Ultimately, the OP's pitch to Moritz ("my poker success can be translate to success as a venture capitalist") was interesting enough to land him a meeting, but not compelling enough to close the deal.