I shouldn’t be writing this. Every time I read something NSA/FBI/CIA/KGB/Interpol/MI5/Stasi related I get this instinctive feeling of angriness and sadness at the same time. We were given the “internet”, pretty much for free, and we believed it would be a fair deal? That there would be nothing in for them? When was the last time you were give something for free, can you even remember? They are breaking encryption? Re…
The problem with the writing style where only the last line brings the change in mood is that a lot of people don't read everything.
The direct call to action is always a better approach.
Don't make the text full with wrong arguments and end it with "but." Just write the good arguments.