The closest present-day analog to Engelbart's collaborative editing demo (edit: I mean specifically the document-editing portion, not the video etc.) is not screen-sharing, but modern collaborative editors (Google Docs, Etherpad), which do provide multiple cursors. Thus the screen-sharing analogy is a straw man, and the author hasn't really made his case against "drawing correspondences to our present-day systems" fr…
In Engelbart's original demo, the users can see each other, talk, collaboratively work on a document, and do together pretty much anything that the computer offers. The full OS, including the GUI, is intended to be multi-user. Google Docs et al. only offer one aspect of that; all they aspire to do is solve the problem of "collaborative editing of a document". But say we need to work on something that involves listeni…
Yes, but it's just the aspect the OP criticizes screen-sharing (as a proxy for present-day technology) for missing. I take your point that these things could be better integrated, though.