Incoherent and far too long . Lists a bunch of things . Fails to make any clear points . Fails to give real reasons for the few claims it makes .
Did you read it all the way to the end? It's coherent and does give real if debatable reasons for the claims it makes, I think it also does so quite clearly although if I'd written it the ordering of the sections would be different. Here's an organically grown summary: • TUIs suck because they are primitive, often buggy, hard to write and aren't accessible. Their existence isn't due to any real technical advantage bu…
I prefer my articles to be coherent without having to wade through pages worth of irrelevant material.