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On the non-use of AI in my writing process

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Re: On the non-use of AI in my writing process

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> but Western culture has lost the vocabulary to express their true sentiment. They are grasping for words but can't reach for "soul" and other religious terms because that would sound ridiculous in a secular modern world Ironic to implicitly accuse Stross of this; as I recall, he's one of the voices describing The Singularity as Christian Eschatology/Book of Revelation/the rapture for atheist nerds. > Would you want…

You need better arguments than "you don't like to use it yourself and prefer writing yourself" or some metaphysical voodoo-like theory (analogous to tribes that refuse to be captured on a photo) whereby feeding your words to a training algorithm somehow corrupts your pure Platonic words or whatnot. Your utterances are not yours to grab on to. Copyright is about expression and derivatives. You could never copyright yo…

> You need better arguments than "you don't like to use it yourself and prefer writing yourself"

Nobody needs a better argument than that to explain the title "On the non-use of AI in my writing process"

> You could never copyright your style, or else any music band that copies the general style of another band could have been sued and then the development of music would also have gone quite differently.

You cant copyright style or facts, but somehow the combination of the two is what newspapers rely upon.

> No, ideas, styles, claims, knowledge are by default part of the commons.

I can say this about 100% of things banned by laws. The laws are what changes us away from the default.

> This whole copyright and intellectual "property" idea is extremely new in human history. More people should know this fact. This has not been how people thought about culture before the ~1800s

Everything pre ~1800s was awful, so this is not a useful argument for or against anything.

> preventing others from talking about what they heard is tyrannical

Are you saying an AI is in the same category as a human in terms of what it is "tyrannical" to forbid it to produce? This is not a widely held position, even amongst people very impressed with what they can do. The justification given for why AI should be able to read all the things and write new outputs from them is that nobody objected when the same models working the same way were worse at it and could only produce e.g. (c. 2020) Google Translate. If they were reliant on some model being allowed to act like a human, they would be (and indeed frequently are anyway) facing questions about how to punish the models for breaking rules like humans get punished for breaking rules.

(Separately: For humans I kinda agree with what I just quoted from you, however it does also mean that NDAs and non-disparagement agreements should also be voided; the 'kinda' on my part says NDAs should have a maximum duration equivalent to a patent).

> The whole thing is often wrongly framed, with verbs like "consume", like "consuming content", which is just Orwellian language to describe having your eyes or ears open and remembering what you saw and heard. It doesn't consume a pdf to look at the words and read them. It doesn't consume a film to look at it being projected on a canvas. It doesn't consume a painting to step close and look.

IMO, that's like criticising the use of "master" in a git repo.

Re: On the non-use of AI in my writing process

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I get what you're saying (mostly based on low bandwidth from sensory organs as opposed to direct access to reality), but your conclusion that we therefore don't have embodiment goes very far. It would be like saying planes don't really fly, since they fly by wire and only have limited inputs and outputs, rather than direct access to reality itself. Well, yeah, they fly using sensors rather than knowing reality itself…

I'm not quite sure of the definitions but with sentience I have >Subjective Experience: Involves raw sensory awareness rather than complex abstract thought On that current AI is a bit lacking as they don't have very good sensors whereas human brains are pretty wired up for touch, smell, sight, sound and the like. AIs do get linked to cameras though and could improve a lot in those directions.

> On that current AI is a bit lacking as they don't have very good sensors whereas human brains are pretty wired up for touch, smell, sight, sound and the like.

For sight and sound, the sensory input layer for AIs is much, much richer in terms of bitrate, though is redundant.

> AIs do get linked to cameras though and could improve a lot in those directions.

Video is an interesting one, as most AI systems use the full pixel information of a scene, while human vision is much more temporal, focusing primarily on logistic deltas rather than raw pixels. That's not inherent to hardware (e.g. see event or "neuromorphic" cameras), but it's a significant difference. My more sympathetic reading of embodiment is that the relative paucity of the human sensory stream is part of what makes us work better than current AI in many domains, in that it forces us to form richer, temporal world models from a low bitrate stream of salient events instead of relying on shallow responses to rich sensory data.

Re: On the non-use of AI in my writing process

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I don't think it ever gets old to restate that the singularity and all of the gradiose promises of a glorious 21st century have last mile problems. But this post seems to mostly channel Harlan Ellison. And while he was amazing in his prime, with some absolutely legendary rants, he didn't age well in the end. I do like his challenge to make LLMs useful to himself and to other authors though. Someone needs to make that…

I'd quite like a tool (running entirely locally on my own hardware, with no cloud service and no copyright-thieving grifters making bank on it via subscription fees) that digests a manuscript and derives a scene-by-scene timeline, that I could then query interactively and use to plan my next round of edits. Being able to map out where and when each protagonist and minor character shows up, and see a frequency distrib…

GenAI tools getting folded into workflows is IMO the endgame here. Using an LLM to review a story in progress and search for plot holes, contradictions and everything else he described seems like it would be really useful to me in the same way coding agents are great for diagnosing gnarly config and container issues. In my own use case, asking the LLM to find a way to close out a song verse when I can't find the right words has been awesome.

That seems like an advance on the toolchain described here:

https://www.thewritersforhire.com/11-great-organization-tool...

Re: On the non-use of AI in my writing process

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I think attitudes like this are traitorous to the human species. You’re not talking about a transcendence, or at least, not one that I recognise. Our biology is an innate part of us - to improve, to fix, sure, but not to cast off. Who is directing this “transcendence”, and who benefits? I absolutely do not want a religious tone to any of this. Awful vibes.

> You’re not talking about a transcendence, or at least, not one that I recognise. Does the gap scare you somehow? Why? Any artificial biology (and whatever hosts a live human spirit automatically becomes a life form - thus, a biology) is entirely our, human product. If it's not ours, whose else it is? > Our biology is an innate part of us - to improve, to fix, sure, but not to cast off. I agree that our biology is 1…

Yeah, techno-religious types scare me. They're profoundly anti-human and seem capable of some heinous shit.

You've written a lot of words to say "humans are flawed, let's create a machine that's better", but trying to dress it up in flowery, lofty language. I'm not impressed by that. You have the programmer's disease of over-abstraction and over-active pattern recognition. You try to blur the line between essentially human, biological medicine, and technological development. They are not the same thing; they have completely different philosophies and aims.

I'll answer my rhetorical question: at the moment, and for the foreseeable future, people like Sam Altman and Dario Amodei are directing a lot of this. I do not want this. Enclaves of profit-seeking technologists are more-or-less the last people I want doing... well, anything, actually, but certainly not something that gets people like you in a religious fervour.

Re: On the non-use of AI in my writing process

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post #144

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> You’re not talking about a transcendence, or at least, not one that I recognise. Does the gap scare you somehow? Why? Any artificial biology (and whatever hosts a live human spirit automatically becomes a life form - thus, a biology) is entirely our, human product. If it's not ours, whose else it is? > Our biology is an innate part of us - to improve, to fix, sure, but not to cast off. I agree that our biology is 1…

Yeah, techno-religious types scare me. They're profoundly anti-human and seem capable of some heinous shit. You've written a lot of words to say "humans are flawed, let's create a machine that's better", but trying to dress it up in flowery, lofty language. I'm not impressed by that. You have the programmer's disease of over-abstraction and over-active pattern recognition. You try to blur the line between essentially…

I’m not sure how you interpreted it all, but neither I was talking about any foreseeable future (I explicitly said that I dunno if LLMs are somewhat relatable to all this), nor I’m a religious type (I merely used a term “spirit” because this language was suggested in the thread).

Every example was picked and vetted from popsci books I’ve read, with real basis in neuroscience (in my layman understanding, obviously, so I could’ve gotten something wrong, but I trust that a bit more than an online diagnosis). That blending was a pretty naive mix of a bunch of sci-fi tropes, but point taken - proper writers indeed blur those lines a lot better than my mess of a post.

Re: On the non-use of AI in my writing process

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I apologize for having generalized from a specific AI to all, given that the comment I replied to made a claim regarding all AI.

Someone says "cars are so comfortable now." Someone else responds "In my experience they are no better than in the 80s." Isn't it prudent to point that the second person drives Mirage or something like that? The first sentence seems to imply the average state. No?

I guess, if a Mirage is one of the most common cars that everyone encounters multiple times in a day.

The problem really is I haven't used these other AIs for finding links to things I am an expert in, so I cannot really say how likely they are to get things completely wrong, or at least have one wrong or misinterpreted fact per response.

Re: On the non-use of AI in my writing process

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post #141

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You need better arguments than "you don't like to use it yourself and prefer writing yourself" or some metaphysical voodoo-like theory (analogous to tribes that refuse to be captured on a photo) whereby feeding your words to a training algorithm somehow corrupts your pure Platonic words or whatnot. Your utterances are not yours to grab on to. Copyright is about expression and derivatives. You could never copyright yo…

> You need better arguments than "you don't like to use it yourself and prefer writing yourself" Nobody needs a better argument than that to explain the title "On the non-use of AI in my writing process" > You could never copyright your style, or else any music band that copies the general style of another band could have been sued and then the development of music would also have gone quite differently. You cant cop…

> You cant copyright style or facts, but somehow the combination of the two is what newspapers rely upon.

You can start a shitty newspaper by looking at all the stories in some other newspaper, then writing about the same facts while imitating a similar register and style.

> Are you saying an AI is in the same category as a human in terms of what it is "tyrannical" to forbid it to produce?

The AI is not an independent entity as of today. The tyranny is against humans who want to use computation to process information they have gathered by listening to public discourse, public art releases and so on.

> how to punish the models for breaking rules like humans get punished for breaking rules.

Again, AI is not an independent agent today, so the person who is using an AI program in a way that is illegal is the one that gets punished.

> however it does also mean that NDAs and non-disparagement agreements should also be voided; the 'kinda' on my part says NDAs should have a maximum duration equivalent to a patent

It's a matter of discussion whether such voluntary agreements should be allowed where someone agrees to refraining from such actions. We don't allow contracts about selling your organs, but this may not go as far.

> IMO, that's like criticising the use of "master" in a git repo.

No there is no similarity at all. "Consume content" is novel marketing language, because to them it's easier to think of everyone as "consumer" because sometimes they sell hamburgers or ice cream to them, sometimes they sell subscriptions to cable TV, sometimes subscriptions to SaaS, and they don't care too much what they sell. So from their POV it's all the same. Since the consumer is paying for access to something, they must be consuming that thing. When they watch TV, it's like eating the burger, from the point of view of someone optimizing sales. But this is pushing the entirety of humanity to see everything from such a narrow lens as advertisement. The same is with the word "content". There used to be musicians and authors, now you have "content creators". "Content" is a marketing word. It means all the stuff that's not an ad. In marketing, you interface with your "consumers" primariy by making them watch ads. But to watch the ad, they need some lure, and the catchall term to all that icky stuff a marketing person has to handle or touch, even briefly, that's not a warm and fuzz little ad, is "content". It's like "payload" in the shipping industry. Imagine if tomorrow we called everything phyiscal simply "payload". You are not a carpenter, you're a payload creator. You're not a car wash company, you're a payload cleaning company. etc.

Re: On the non-use of AI in my writing process

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> They're word-association mechanisms with no embodiment and no way to associate the text vectors they manipulate with real-world phenomena. Doesn't most of this also apply to a guy living in The Matrix?

Embodiment doesn't exist, even in regular humans. We do not have direct access to reality; we have sensory inputs that are much lower bandwidth than one might expect but correlate with external events, and our brain uses them to form rich world models that are usefully predictive. Most of the world we experience is just in our head.

Well here's a fun one. If the outside is simulated, why not the inside?

Re: On the non-use of AI in my writing process

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Crazy to assume that an individual of vision has so thoroughly dropped the plot simply because their position is at odds with tech industry orthodoxy. If anything that should be an indication to more closely examine your assumptions.

Anyone that is against American big tech immediately makes me sympathetic to their side. They'd have to do a lot wrong to destroy such good will.

I'm with you. If the last 30 years have proven anything it's that enthusiasm for tech industry hype is at best historically illiterate.
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