Hamburg's Stadtpark: A Park Built to Be Used
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#12Moving from Manchester to Hamburg the difference in greenery is already pretty astounding, but Stadtpark is really the jewel. Wonderfully maintained, easy transport access and close enough to the centre that you can walk it without the dog getting exhausted, a few spots to get a beer or a schorle when needed. One of the highlights of the city.
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#13It's in the name: stadtpark, city park. In defense of Berlin's Tiergarten, it was originally a hunting preserve for deer (and Hasenheide was for rabbits), so it's big and intimidating. But there are still facilities in it that serve the neighboring residents. And throughout Berlin there are multiple volksparks, people's parks, which have everything the author mentions. In most cities, parks evolve to serve the reside…
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#16I got the same sense at Schloss Schönbrunn in Vienna. Not so much the practical amenities but that it's still obvious that it was made for royalty going for strolls or looking for secluded shade areas. It's just a genuinely nice space & was more than a little jealous of the joggers that clearly use it for their daily run
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#17Fascinating phenomenon, but this sentence caused me to stop reading and close the tab.
"Slop", I thought.
Now I think about it, I'm not even sure I can put my finger on what about that sentence came across as AI slop.
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#19> What stayed with me was not the swimming. It was that none of it looked planned. She was not spending her afternoon at the lake, she was just going through her day, and the lake happened to be part of it. Fascinating phenomenon, but this sentence caused me to stop reading and close the tab. "Slop", I thought. Now I think about it, I'm not even sure I can put my finger on what about that sentence came across as AI s…
Although the verb "stayed with me" seems a little sloppy to me too.
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#20> What stayed with me was not the swimming. It was that none of it looked planned. She was not spending her afternoon at the lake, she was just going through her day, and the lake happened to be part of it. Fascinating phenomenon, but this sentence caused me to stop reading and close the tab. "Slop", I thought. Now I think about it, I'm not even sure I can put my finger on what about that sentence came across as AI s…
Of course, one can never be sure. Many writers are picking up on this style, too, so it could have organic origins.