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How to write English prose (2023)

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Re: How to write English prose (2023)

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post #18

For me there is only one rule of writing: Reader must enjoy reading what you wrote. They are ultimately the final judge - the very reason to write anything at all. Anything else is just huffing your own farts for the kick of it. No matter how flowery the words are in your book or how intricate nuances of language. Such things can be outright counterproductive.

That's still bad advice. Sometimes writing is just useful, not enjoyable.

If it’s useful, as in - it has informative function, then digestibility is even more important.

That’s the core tenet of any piece of journalism after all. To present information in an accessible way.

Re: How to write English prose (2023)

#32
post #31

Earlier quoted context omitted.

That's still bad advice. Sometimes writing is just useful, not enjoyable.

If it’s useful, as in - it has informative function, then digestibility is even more important. That’s the core tenet of any piece of journalism after all. To present information in an accessible way.

Digestible doesn't mean enjoyable.

Re: How to write English prose (2023)

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post #8

This guy hates Strunk and White’s Elements of Style , the famous "omit needless words" book. He's plugging for a baroque style that would be unreadable today. We do have baroque styles today, but they're different from classical baroque literature. They're the postings that start with a bio and cover the author's hobbies before getting to the point, perhaps including an anecdote from the author's past. There are writ…

I can't remember who, but someone definitely said "if you want to write, you must first fill a chest with writing, then lock that chest, take out a blank sheet and then you can begin".

TFA as well as many other works of blog, belong in that chest.

Re: How to write English prose (2023)

#35
post #8

This guy hates Strunk and White’s Elements of Style , the famous "omit needless words" book. He's plugging for a baroque style that would be unreadable today. We do have baroque styles today, but they're different from classical baroque literature. They're the postings that start with a bio and cover the author's hobbies before getting to the point, perhaps including an anecdote from the author's past. There are writ…

  'We have really everything in common with America nowadays, except, of course, language.'
said Oscar Wilde with eyebrow raised toward Webster, Strunk and White.

Apparently this struck a chord in mid-Atlantic anglophiles, forcing an era of bleating on about ol' Blighty.

Re: How to write English prose (2023)

#36
post #15

Writing styles like this actually gets in the way of reading a story in my opinion and, I also assume, is also some high-brow writers way of getting around for the need for an actual story anyway. Many of the books I had to read at school, and that "cultured" friends read are like this, but truthfully they put me off reading, and is the type of writing I (as an author) go out of my way to avoid unless the character i…

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Re: How to write English prose (2023)

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post #5

Kept out of sight in this rogue essay is the classic question: Who's your audience? If you're writing for yourself (and maybe a very small number of equally erudite readers) cut loose! Embrace "anfractuous density and heedless flamboyance." But if you're trying to change people's minds, or share knowledge widely, everything in this essay is defiantly at odds with what's necessary to get the rest of the world to pay a…

What's interesting to me is that the examples he gives are beautiful because of their sincerity. Even if there is artifice, or they're being formal or playful, their style reflects their reading, their shared culture and of course as you say their audience - which I think for them was a very small elite. Anyone who writes in a flamboyant style now - as the essay's author does - necessarily comes across as a kind of p…

Take a copy of "Usage and Abusage" and blend with Lord Byron after applying suitable libations; toss in the bear for body. Season to taste with the darker dictionary (the parts chained down to protect the reader). Simmer over a fire of coked Latin and Greek primers, scented with a whiff of lilac.

Serve in a curiously beige vessel.

Re: How to write English prose (2023)

#38

> How to Write English Prose > There are few if any passages in the works of Sir Thomas Browne that I do not find thoroughly delightful; but two afford me particularly intense pleasure. > To my mind, each is in its own way a perfect, exquisitely faceted gem of English prose from an especially glorious literary epoch. The music of the one has haunted me for most of my life; Oh come on. Sir Thomas Browne looks well wor…

Who was it said "Death to all modifiers"?

Nouns, verbs, prepositions, and articles. Use those.

Re: How to write English prose (2023)

#40
post #5

Kept out of sight in this rogue essay is the classic question: Who's your audience? If you're writing for yourself (and maybe a very small number of equally erudite readers) cut loose! Embrace "anfractuous density and heedless flamboyance." But if you're trying to change people's minds, or share knowledge widely, everything in this essay is defiantly at odds with what's necessary to get the rest of the world to pay a…

Ultracrepidarian!
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