I found the agressively staccato, clearly LLM-generated content extremely difficult to read.
I like the way it's written. I often write in a similar manner and I have never used LLMs to generate an writing for me. I have written exactly this way at work. Too me, the author is just trying to get to the point. They know people start skimming if there is too much text.
> The important catch
> The favicon doesn't actually contain the whole website itself.
This is the kind of thing that is extremely idiomatic LLM speak. There's nothing particularly wrong about it per se, but it just makes everyone who is familiar with LLMs say "oh, it's written by an AI" and it just becomes disappointing.