I fear this is going to be taken poorly, but this really made an impression on me. This is not a criticism of the author, nor really a condemnation of the lifestyle depicted - but only an observation. I find the "Myths of The Valley" both very interesting and very frustrating. This is about the Myth, not about the author. This reads like a religious testimony, or a classic Campbell myth. It begins with scripture from…
Your storytelling style will effect who your story appeals to. I mean, great storytellers can transcend styles, but for most of us? we're writin' form letters. And really? there's nothing wrong with that.
(I do think there is something wrong with the 'all nighter' myth, especially when told to people too young to know that it's a lie, but it's largely inseparable from the silicon valley mythos.)