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No worries, I don't mean to disparage your article. At least it avoids some of the most annoying LLMism I have seen, and given its length you must have put some effort into prompting, researching, or editing. Hope you will find your own voice as you write more and more.
Youtube these days is full of probably great and interesting documentaries, where people put a lot of time in, but when I hear these typical LLM narrations I can't make it more then a few seconds in, they are horrible.
America's Greatest Strategic Blunder: The Imprisonment of Qian Xuesen
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#32Re: America's Greatest Strategic Blunder: The Imprisonment of Qian Xuesen
#33If you wanna read an article containing essentially the same information without the pesky LLM voice: https://www.usni.org/magazines/naval-history/2025/december/m...
This is an incredible piece of writing, to accuse it of LLM voice borders on sacrilege
> Kimball was right at the level he was reading it, but wrong about which decision he was reading
What the fuck does this sentence mean?
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#34Re: America's Greatest Strategic Blunder: The Imprisonment of Qian Xuesen
#35If you wanna read an article containing essentially the same information without the pesky LLM voice: https://www.usni.org/magazines/naval-history/2025/december/m...
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#36Earlier quoted context omitted.
This is an incredible piece of writing, to accuse it of LLM voice borders on sacrilege
It is LLM with a clever prompt that avoids the most egregious tells (though "load-bearing" appears). The number of times the article goes on complete tangents, introducing new irrelevant names and the general useless level of detail, all in perfect verbose English points to an LLM. So does the upbeat and persuasive style. If you write that level of detail, use a historian's style and footnotes. Do not use the synthet…
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#37If you wanna read an article containing essentially the same information without the pesky LLM voice: https://www.usni.org/magazines/naval-history/2025/december/m...
The kneejerk accusations of LLM even when it passes easily-available tests is intellectually lazy and does not belong on HN.
>The error was not stupidity, corruption, or ideology, but a structural failure of the threat-detection apparatus to model what the asset actually represented.
Re: America's Greatest Strategic Blunder: The Imprisonment of Qian Xuesen
#38If you wanna read an article containing essentially the same information without the pesky LLM voice: https://www.usni.org/magazines/naval-history/2025/december/m...
The kneejerk accusations of LLM even when it passes easily-available tests is intellectually lazy and does not belong on HN.
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#39Earlier quoted context omitted.
It's one of the classic blunders: never get involved in a land war in asia.
unless you are Alexander the great and even then, your armies would get tired of fighting for so long for a piece of land far far away from their homeland and they would wish to get homes.
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#40Earlier quoted context omitted.
This is an incredible piece of writing, to accuse it of LLM voice borders on sacrilege
It is LLM with a clever prompt that avoids the most egregious tells (though "load-bearing" appears). The number of times the article goes on complete tangents, introducing new irrelevant names and the general useless level of detail, all in perfect verbose English points to an LLM. So does the upbeat and persuasive style. If you write that level of detail, use a historian's style and footnotes. Do not use the synthet…