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AlphaWrite: AI that improves at writing by evolving its own stories

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Re: AlphaWrite: AI that improves at writing by evolving its own stories

#101

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No you can start with actual money.

What about money? You can't force me to want (or not want) someone's goods and services. If you're worried about large scale automation and so forth, I'm fine with something like UBI.

> What about money?

The hundreds of billions being sunk into AI.

> You can't force me to want (or not want) someone's goods and services.

What are you talking about? What does that have to do with anything in this conversation?

> If you're worried about large scale automation and so forth

I'm not.

> I'm fine with something like UBI.

Well as long as you're fine with UBI I guess we can put this conversation to rest.

Seriously, if you don't want to actually participate in the conversation you can just ignore comments. It's fine.

Re: AlphaWrite: AI that improves at writing by evolving its own stories

#102
This completely misses the point of reinforced learning. The reward condition needs to be representative of what you want (e.g. in chess that would be winning).

Using a LLM as a judge means you will ultimately optimize for stories that are liked by the LLM, not necessarily for stories that are liked by people. For this to work the other LLM needs to be as close to a human as possible, but this is what you were trying to do in the first place!

Re: AlphaWrite: AI that improves at writing by evolving its own stories

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More capable AI systems make the world better. If you don't like AI written material on principle, you can simply choose not to read it. Follow human writers who don't use AI.

I feel that when making a claim like that, the burden of proof is on you to explain how AI makes the world a better place. I have seen far more of the opposite since the advent of GPT-3. Please do not say it makes you more productive at your job, unless you can also clearly derive how being better at your job might make the world a better place.

I could list many breakthroughs in medicine, material science, and engineering. Point out how AI makes information more accessible, automates away drudgery, etc. I see it every day, making the world a better place.

But I feel this disagreement isn't precisely about the technical details. If your stance is based on some fundamental idea of politics/philosophy, I can't change your mind.

Re: AlphaWrite: AI that improves at writing by evolving its own stories

#104

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What about money? You can't force me to want (or not want) someone's goods and services. If you're worried about large scale automation and so forth, I'm fine with something like UBI.

> What about money? The hundreds of billions being sunk into AI. > You can't force me to want (or not want) someone's goods and services. What are you talking about? What does that have to do with anything in this conversation? > If you're worried about large scale automation and so forth I'm not. > I'm fine with something like UBI. Well as long as you're fine with UBI I guess we can put this conversation to rest. Se…

In retrospect, we might realize that we didn't spend enough money on AI. Highest-leverage moment in history and such.

But, ok. Let's leave it at that. Peace.

Re: AlphaWrite: AI that improves at writing by evolving its own stories

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Wow! Why? Personally, I'm fascinated by the question of what Joyce would have done with SillyTavern. Or Nabokov. Or Burroughs. Or T S Eliot, who incorporated news clippings into Wasteland - which feels, to me, extremely analogous with the way LLMs refract existing text into new patterns.

There is no answer to the question “what Joyce would have done…”. None. Nil. They are dead and anything done it their name is by definition not what they would have done, but what future generations who are convinced that they know better than the men themselves did. It is better to leave unanswerable questions unanswered. I am not against LLM technologies in general. But this trend of using LLMs to give a seemingly…

I'm confused by this response. I'm fascinated by the question because Joyce (and the other Modernists) are all dead, as you say.

Were they alive, it wouldn't be a question - we'd be able to see how they used new technologies, of which LLMs are one. And if they chose to use them at all.

I wasn't trying to provide an answer to that question. You're right that it's unanswerable. That was my point.

I also - of course - wouldn't presume to know better how to construct a sentence, or story, or novel, using any form of technology, including LLMs, than James Joyce. That would be a completely ridiculous assertion for (almost) anyone, ever, to make, regardless of their generation. I don't really understand what 'generations' have to do with the question I was posing, other than that its underscoring of the central ineffability.

I do, however, think it's valuable to take a school of thought (20th century Modernism, for example) and apply it to a new technological advance in an artform. In the same way, I think it's interesting to consider how 18th century Romantic thought would apply to LLMs.

It's fascinating to imagine Wordsworth, for example, both fully embracing LLMs (where is the OpenRouter Romantic? Can they exist?), and, conversely, fully rejecting LLMs.

Again, I'm not expecting a factual answer - I do understand that Wordsworth isn't alive anymore.

But: taking a new technology (like the printing press) and an old school of thought (like classical Greek philosophy) often yields interesting results - as it did with the Enlightenment.

As such, I don't think there's anything fundamentally wrong with asking unanswerable questions. Quite the opposite. The process of asking is the important part. The answer will be new. That's the other (extremely) important part. How else do you expect forms to advance?

I'm not terribly interested in benchmarking LLMs (especially for creative writing), or in speculating about "explosions of narcissistic disorders", hence not mentioning either. And I certainly wasn't suggesting we attempt to reach a factually correct answer about what Joyce might ask ChatGPT.

(The man deserves some privacy - his letters are gross enough!)

Re: AlphaWrite: AI that improves at writing by evolving its own stories

#106

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Not everyone shares your same world view, and some people do want to apply machine intelligence to their writing process. You don't have to participate; ignore AI-generated or AI-assisted content just like you ignore some other thing you don't enjoy that already exists today. But you also don't have to devalue and dismiss the interests of others.

All the people generating AI-assisted writing are all the people that never had enough passion or talent to do it before. If you weren't inclined to write fiction or poetry etc before AI was here to do it for you, you probably shouldn't be doing it now.

Awful take. Transformers have greatly increased the potential number of cool things I can do in my lifetime. I've written poetry, short stories, I draw, and am an experienced professional software engineer, and thanks to transformers I've been able to augment my creative workflow.

People were similarly dismissive about computers in general. And calculators, and the printing press, and Photoshop, and cameras, and every other disruptive technology. Yet, people found a way to be creative with them even before society accepted their medium.

Truth is, you don't get to decide what someone else's creative journey looks like.

Re: AlphaWrite: AI that improves at writing by evolving its own stories

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Does that disprove your thesis that people cannot make great art (or become “true masters”) with commercial incentives? What does this imply for your broader thesis that nothing is lost if AI destroys commercial incentive for humans to master and develop art further?

No, because commercially motivated artists are inherently more well known than people who master an art but don’t need to promote it. Ultimately if one wants to master an art, money cannot be the incentive, it’s only a byproduct.

Ah, I see. So just running with this theory on an article of faith, with literally zero evidence. Nice!

Art: The one thing in the whole world where incentives don't matter. The stuff of fortune cookies.

Re: AlphaWrite: AI that improves at writing by evolving its own stories

#108

Why would we ever want to build something like this, unless your goal is to have fiction writers make even less money than they already do. Just stop, please. Try and automate some horrible and repetitive drudgery. Do you want to live in a world where humans no longer do any creative work? It’s grotesque.

False dichotomy, overextended outrage and straw man fallacies all rolled into one. Impressive.

Re: AlphaWrite: AI that improves at writing by evolving its own stories

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Ah, fair enough. I believe quite strongly that creative works' meaning exists for the reader / audience / user. I don't think interpretation of art is towards an authorial, authoritative truth - rather that it's a lens to view the world through, and change one's perspective on it - so this is where we differ. But I understand your viewpoint. I do agree that the LLM's idea of achieving the 'best possible story' is def…

> The joy of creating should be in the creation > I think LLMs are the most interesting paintbrush-for-words we've come up with since the typewriter I cannot reconcile these thoughts in my head For me, the joy of creating does not come from asking the computer to create something for me. It doesn't matter what careful prompt I made, I did not create the outcome. The computer did And no, this is not the same as other…

I understand that point of view.

Perhaps this is contextually useful - when writing prose fiction, one technique I've played with recently which I found interesting is generating a really broad spectrum of 'next tokens' halfway through a sentence, via multiple calls to different models on different temp. settings, etc.

It's fascinating to see the expected route for a sentence, and (this is much harder to get LLMs to output!) the unexpected route for a sentence.

But seeing some expected routes, per the LLM, can make the unexpected, surprising, or interesting routes much more clear in the mind's eye. It makes sentences feel closer to music theory.

You are right that this does create a more 'editorial' relationship between yourself and the work.

I'd stress that this isn't a negative thing, and has heavy literary precedence - an example that comes to mind is Gordon Lish's "intuitive structuring" principle, in which you just write the best-sounding next word, and see what the story becomes by itself, then edit from there - a totally sonic approach.

My example here with "arrays of next tokens" is a super granular, paintbrush-type example, but I want to be clear that I'm not at all advocating for the workflow of 'write a prompt, get a piece of art'.

I do however think that there's a vast middleground between "write me a whole book" and "show me the expected next token", and that this middleground is absolutely fascinating.

Not least because it makes literature (an artform previously more resistant to mathematics than say, music, or painting) more in touch with its own mathematics, which were previously very hidden, and are only currently being discovered.

Re: AlphaWrite: AI that improves at writing by evolving its own stories

#110
As a playwright, I've certainly thought about AI impacting the art. In fact, it was the very eloquence of chatgpt's output that initiated all of this mania in the first place: not only was chatgpt able to explain to me gauge theory with surprising accuracy, it was able to do so using perfect Elizabethan english—exactly as I had instructed it to.

There is a missing ingredient that LLMs lack, however. They lack insight. Writing is made engaging by the promise of insight teased in its setups, the depths that are dug through its payoffs, and the revelations found in its conclusion. It requires solving an abstract sudoku puzzle where each sentence builds on something prior and, critically, advances an agenda toward an emotional conclusion. This is the rhetoric inherent to all storytelling, but just as in a good political speech or debate, everything hinges on the quality of the central thesis—the key insight that LLMs do not come equipped to provide on their own.

This is hard. Insight is hard. And an AI supporter would gladly tell you "yes! this is where prompting becomes art!" And perhaps there is merit to this, or at least there is merit insofar as Sam Altman's dreams of AI producing novel insights remain unfulfilled. This condition notwithstanding, what merit exactly do these supporters have? Has prompting become an art the same way that it has become engineering? It would seem AlphaWrite would like to say so.

But let's look at this rubric and evaluate for ourselves what else AlphaWrite would like to say:

```python # Fallback to a basic rubric if file not found return """Creative writing evaluation should consider: 1. Creativity and Originality (25%) - Unique ideas, fresh perspectives, innovative storytelling 2. Writing Quality (25%) - Grammar, style, flow, vocabulary, sentence structure 3. Engagement (20%) - How compelling and interesting the piece is to read 4. Character Development (15%) - Believable, well-developed characters with clear motivations 5. Plot Structure (15%) - Logical progression, pacing, resolution of conflicts""" ```

It's certainly just a default, and I mean no bad faith in using this for rhetorical effect, but this default also acts as a template, and it happens to be informative to my point. Insight, genuine insight, is hard because it is contingent on one's audience and one's shared experiences with them. It isn't enough to check boxes. Might I ask what makes for a better story: a narrative about a well developed princess who provides fresh perspectives on antiquated themes, or a narrative about a well developed stock broker who provides fresh perspectives on contemporary themes? The output fails to find its audience no matter what your rubric is.

And here lies the dilemma regarding the idea that prompts are an art: they are not. The prompts are not art by the simple fact that nobody will read them. What is read is what all that is communicated and any discerning audience will be alienated by anything generated by something as ambiguous as a English teacher's grading rubric.

I write because I want to communicate my insights to an audience who I believe would be influenced by them. I may be early in my career, but this is why I do it. The degree of influence I shall have measures the degree of "art" I shall attain. Not by whether or not I clear the minimum bar of literacy.

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