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Re: Mvl

#31

I posted this [1] here a few days ago: > Just off the top of my head you know what I would like to see as an email interface: Reddit. Each headline being the suvject being an email with all the comments being the replies. Different users can reply in a threaded way to all the recipients of the message etc. Obviously it would need in-line attachements and in-line pictures. It would be interesting to allow a vote syste…

>> the costing model is too high I know, there is a feature that I thought was worth quite a bit, and I didn't include it but based the pricing model off of I'll attempt to fix this soon, it's currently late here and I'm very tired :(

Where are you located? I'd love to beta this and provide feedback? Would you be interested in this... I am a product manager, IT background and other things... I alos have an amazing Designer I could hook you up with...

I'd like to help.

Let me know. My email is in profile.

Re: Mvl

#33

Earlier quoted context omitted.

>> the costing model is too high I know, there is a feature that I thought was worth quite a bit, and I didn't include it but based the pricing model off of I'll attempt to fix this soon, it's currently late here and I'm very tired :(

Where are you located? I'd love to beta this and provide feedback? Would you be interested in this... I am a product manager, IT background and other things... I alos have an amazing Designer I could hook you up with... I'd like to help. Let me know. My email is in profile.

Thank you for the offer, I'll email you tomorrow, It's late here at the moment and I really need sleep :(

Re: Mvl

#35
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I intend this as constructive criticism, so I hope you understand that and take it as such: please hire a designer. Email is an app one stares at all day, it has to look good. Not fancy, but restful and pleasing to the eye with function dictating form.

I promise I will hire a designer as hire #1, I'm aware my design is atrocious :D

You should be able to fix the readability of this without hiring a designer. Not that you shouldn't hire a designer, but you shouldn't wait to fix it before you hire one either. Since email is all about text, if it looks unreadable that's going to be a big turn-off. Read at least the next paragraph of my post!

To start, I would reduce the font sizes on your header-type items somewhat. It's clear that you're using large fonts and bold to emphasize key information (which is the right idea), but a heuristic I've found is that if you're using bold, your font doesn't need to be as big, or if you're using a large size, you may not need to be bold. When you do both, it's like an assault on the eyes, which you don't need here. Doing this alone would make your app like 75% better (note: I made that number up entirely and don't know very much about your app.)

Next, you could tone down the reds (I would change the hard red #F00 color to the softer pink-ish color, and then reduce the pinkish color further), and exchange the black on white for something else. For your icons, you could experiment with grays (I like to start with #333 and then go up or down), so they're less overwhelming.

Finally, add some labels for your icons. Remember how you made your fonts smaller before? Well that applies to these labels. They should be contrasty so you can read them, but otherwise it's fine if they're subtle.

A couple of minor points about your website: the proper name of your competitor is Gmail, not GMail. You should add more spacing between your icons and the text (it feels crowded currently.) Also, your circle arrow jobs are getting cut off at the bottom.

Finally part ii: don't forget to steal from others. Obviously I don't mean blatantly stealing a design, but just check out what other sites do. To do this effectively, you have to pick a particular thing and examine it closely. So for example, if you want to figure out how to do headers, go to other sites and see what they do to give emphasis to things without being overwhelming.

Re: Mvl

#38
More constructive criticism: your benefits seem to really be features. To convert your features to benefits, you need to talk about likely possible use cases. For example, one "benefit" that you list is "Custom notifications", but that doesn't really tell me anything - it doesn't connect to me at all. Instead if you had said "Get invoice notifications when you get to work", that would resonate with me more. You'd obviously have to tailor your benefits to your target customers.

Re: Mvl

#39
>>What's in the backend?

>>Derpyhooves, a custom mail engine I'm writing from scratch in Ruby.

I know that programmers like to come up with fun names for their projects, but I think naming the core of your business after an MLP character is a bit over the top.

Re: Mvl

#40
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I intend this as constructive criticism, so I hope you understand that and take it as such: please hire a designer. Email is an app one stares at all day, it has to look good. Not fancy, but restful and pleasing to the eye with function dictating form.

I promise I will hire a designer as hire #1, I'm aware my design is atrocious :D

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