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Re: Review my Startup pre-launch page : Guchex http://www.guchex.com

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Post by RyanBrantley » Fri, Jul 27, 2012, 9:06 PM UTC

viniciusfbm wrote: post #10

RyanBrantley wrote: post #7

Nice site! Here is something I threw together. Maybe you can try a split test? http://i.imgur.com/N6fEk.jpg The problem I had when I visited your site was I could not quite understand what the product was about. I was not convinced enough to provide my email and expect a positive result. Use the video to tell us what you are building, what it does (will do) and/or how awesome the team building it is. Bring the produc…

We are working on it right now, but we have quoted some explanation video studios, and the minimium price that we found is U$3000 that is quite expensive for us, since we are a bootstraping company.

Apparently, im in the wrong business!

How about a graphic like this instead: http://goo.gl/Zu7Hq ?

I'd make a bet you could make one yourself in a few short hours.

Re: Review my Startup pre-launch page : Guchex http://www.guchex.com

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Post by viniciusfbm » Fri, Jul 27, 2012, 9:09 PM UTC

pizza wrote: post #9

viniciusfbm wrote: post #8

Earlier quoted context omitted.

I have changed some details as you said about the text sizes, can you have a look, do you think is it better now?

It's better, but the problem now is that there is a massive gap on one side, and text floating around on the other. Try to put the sign up text above the email address form and decrease the vertical gap.

Thank you a lot for your feedback, if possible have a look again we have changed it! thanks!

Re: Review my Startup pre-launch page : Guchex http://www.guchex.com

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Post by viniciusfbm » Fri, Jul 27, 2012, 9:11 PM UTC

RyanBrantley wrote: post #11

viniciusfbm wrote: post #10

Earlier quoted context omitted.

We are working on it right now, but we have quoted some explanation video studios, and the minimium price that we found is U$3000 that is quite expensive for us, since we are a bootstraping company.

Apparently, im in the wrong business! How about a graphic like this instead: http://goo.gl/Zu7Hq ? I'd make a bet you could make one yourself in a few short hours.

Thanks Ryan, we will work on this, it is a good way to explain our business better!

Re: Review my Startup pre-launch page : Guchex http://www.guchex.com

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Post by pizza » Fri, Jul 27, 2012, 9:40 PM UTC

viniciusfbm wrote: post #12

pizza wrote: post #9

Earlier quoted context omitted.

It's better, but the problem now is that there is a massive gap on one side, and text floating around on the other. Try to put the sign up text above the email address form and decrease the vertical gap.

Thank you a lot for your feedback, if possible have a look again we have changed it! thanks!

Much better. Now I would make the "Sign up now for early access!" text vertically align with the text on the left. You should probably also use the same colors for your background as you do for your logo, since they look like pale shades of the same color.