Let's talk about the actual one page extract of her essay, which can be seen in the article, it is the second image. My take is, if she used AI to generate that, she didn't use a very good one. I don't think ChatGPT would make the grammar and clarity mistakes that you see in the image text. I see this: "should be exposed to many of these forms and models to strengthen understanding" - much better as "should be expose…
Honestly I think you could set AI entirely to the side here, it seems increasingly a cultural meme (and an unfortunately accurate one) that kids can't read or write. And not just on social media either, I've seen this crop up in official training and my professional experience matches it too. The vast majority of people in the United States just write really, really poorly, and the average reading level sits at an ut…
I work in a field where I _think_ that clarity of communication is critically important. But then I see people that can't read or write worth a damn getting promotions and the like, and I think, maybe I'm just an old curmudgeon.
To others (not you ToucanLoucan): If you are reading this and you are wondering how you can become the person who doesn't send the email that is taken to mean "turn the server off now" when what you meant to say was "turn the server on now", all you really need to learn is to fully proof read your messages before you click send, in my opinion. And to write as much as you can. Everything else will take care of itself; you will naturally get better and better at it.