Rule 2 (“causation creates correlation”) would be strongly disputed by a lot of people. It relies on the assumption of “faithfulness” which is not discussed until the bottom of the article. This is a very innocent sounding assumption but it’s actually quite strong. In particular it may be violated when there are control systems or strategic agents as part of the system you want to study — which is often the case for…
Your point is great in that it pinpoints also the notions of agency scopes. In all the causal DAGs it feels like there are implicit regions: ones where we can influence or not, intervene or not, observe or not, where one is responsible for or not.
An intelligent agent is one capable of modelling a system, influence it, and bias it. Such that it can reach and exploit an existing corner case of it. I talk about a corner case because of entropy and murphy's law. For a given energy, there are way many more unadvantageous states than advantageous one. And the intelligence of a system is the complexity required to wield the entropy reduction of an energy source.