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can you review the first half of this article (background story) https://newbeelearn.com/blog/what-happens-when-you-get-2nd-p... it was my attempt at being funny.
I can’t tolerate self deprecating humor. Your post should not aim to be funny at your expense. Shouldn’t have the tone of “oh poor me”. I’d rewrite it and remove the humor. Only add humor if it adds value to the information. And that’s the crux of it. Focus on giving as much value as possible. Forget the rest.
thanks for reviewing it.