Good writing advice says that each sentence has a single goal. The goal is to draw the reader in, and convince them to read the next sentence. This article does it masterfully. The title drew me in. The opening sentence finished the job. Well done.
I always feel like the goal of every Scott Alexander sentence is to show how he is smarter and/or more rational than other people.
In the long run, we're all Dad
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#72Why the heck is this guy using AI robot technobabble like "surprisal-minimization engines" and "hyperpriors" to reference the birth of their kids. That's so fucked up, not everything in the world is about "tech" and VC-fueled bubbles for goodness' sake! I realize that we're on the orange site and VC is everything here, but still it's the first time I've seen anything remotely like this. And regardless it can't possib…
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#74Good writing advice says that each sentence has a single goal. The goal is to draw the reader in, and convince them to read the next sentence. This article does it masterfully. The title drew me in. The opening sentence finished the job. Well done.
I always feel like the goal of every Scott Alexander sentence is to show how he is smarter and/or more rational than other people.
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#75Congrats to him. I’ve seen stats that somewhere between 30-50% of all twins are born through IVF. So technically not a huge surprise on that result. A little surprised on the 50% death rate for children before the age of 5 in 1800. It’s amazing how recent that is.
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#77Why the heck is this guy using AI robot technobabble like "surprisal-minimization engines" and "hyperpriors" to reference the birth of their kids. That's so fucked up, not everything in the world is about "tech" and VC-fueled bubbles for goodness' sake! I realize that we're on the orange site and VC is everything here, but still it's the first time I've seen anything remotely like this. And regardless it can't possib…
Talk to a layperson about kubernetes and crypto-anarchy and you'll notice their eyes will glaze over as well.
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#78Earlier quoted context omitted.
Myself I closed the tab at the second sentence, so I can't attest to that.
Because the second sentence mentions the Bible? Or some other reason? If it’s the former, I’m a Christian but I don’t just close out articles if they’re written by Richard Dawkins or quickly proclaim that they’re an atheist. There’s still a very real chance that they have some wisdom to share. Just because people share a different religious view than me doesn’t mean I can’t learn from them.
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#79DINK life. I can’t understand why people consciously decide to have children. I really can’t.
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#80Earlier quoted context omitted.
Scott Alexander is not for everyone (as I've learned by unsuccessfully foisting him on friends for years) but for people who are even remotely interested he is probably the greatest internet writer alive. I'd love to hear alternative GOATs.
For me, Sam Kriss takes that title by a large margin: https://samkriss.substack.com/
he's a curmudgeon with love in his heart. and style. i'm laughing my head off. love it, thanks!