You could at least tidy up the presentation. > A free, open source solution for creating github repositories from the commandline avoid the usual copy and paste. Keep up to date on issues, and much more. Needs a comma. > octogit login <username> <password> # allows you to store your github authetication data octogit create <reponame> 'description' # lets you create the repository both locally and on github octo…
"You could at least tidy up the presentation." It's your grouchy tone.
The bottom line is that these are glaring problems that a five year old could spot and, to most people, it's pretty obvious that if you're presenting something you should proof read it.