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I'm on your side, but every time you say "a hypermedia" it kills me.
I'm not a native English speaker so, honest question: isn't h a consonant with its own distinct sound, so a instead of an?
Usually, including in “hypermedia”, but “hypermedia” is either an adjective or a mass noun, not a countable noun of which you can have a single instance.
“a hypermedia... ” looks like you are using it as an adjective to modify a countable noun, and when there is no noun looks like you forgot the noun; “JSON is not a hypermedia unto itself...” should probably be something “JSON isn’t hypermedia unto itself... ” (I’d actually prefer “JSON, on its own, isn’t hypermedia”, but that gets behind the issue with the use of the indefinite article.