I think it's a thoughtful tale, but I really cannot get behind the premise. Was our attention really stolen ? Is this a literal claim, or just hyperbole? It's a vice of the modern world. We have made food that tastes wo good, you want to eat forever. We have drugs which give you euphoria (for a time). And, we have entertainment that is far better than before. Well, for one I don't think there is anything particularly…
It's obviously figurative... unless you believe Professor MindMiner has built a machine to *schlorp* liquidified Attention out of unsuspecting victims into his own swollen and increasingly-monomaniacal cranium.
However it's much shorter than "impaired or damaged without our informed consent by outside forces because it profits them to do so."