Honestly, it's not so bad. It's easy to pick any such attempt apart. This is close to my favorite pithy way of explaining it, too, which is to break it down component-wise using the idea of filter banks. It's not a single sentence, but here's what I tend to say: Any signal—like sounds or electrical signals, or even images—can be thought of as having a certain amount of 'energy' at any choice of frequency. This makes…
This is good, but I think it's cyclical (heh). We want to compare our signal with a "pure tone". What's a pure tone? A sine wave. Why is a sine wave a pure tone? Because when we compare it with a pure tone, it's identical.
Here, I just tried to define them “Pure tones are signals that have the unique property of putting all of the energy at exactly one frequency” and then use sine as an example.
Truly, complex rotations are a much better definition, but it’s somewhat reasonable to expect people to be familiar with sine waves.