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Re: Ask HN: How to get better at writing?

#11
I blogged every day for a while. That helped but it was grueling. With everything, practice makes perfect.

Working with an editor is huge. I worked with several editors and reviewers both when submitting to other blogs and when writing my books. I learned a lot.

There are great writer assistance tools such as Write Good, etc. They helped with avoiding weasel phrasing, etc.

Re: Ask HN: How to get better at writing?

#12
Keeping a daily diary by hand is a good first step. When you’re reading, look for sentences whose construction surprises you or is otherwise novel. If you can, try to pay attention to how the parts of speech are being used to form the sentence’s structure. Rereading the diary once a month and making line edits will put into mind your own bad habits. In time, an intuitive set of reasoning about how to marry the idea to the structure of the sentence will develop. Continuing to express, articulate, and expand on that reasoning will make the act of writing more enjoyable and the writing itself better.

Sentences should have a quality that makes them individually memorable.

Re: Ask HN: How to get better at writing?

#16
Read books by Gary Provost on writing. Writing Tools by Roy Peter Clark. Draft number 4 by McPhee. They contain a variety of ideas. Writing Tools is great if you want to identify and drill techniques. Provost's books cover everything and are written well.

Re: Ask HN: How to get better at writing?

#17
post #14

There's a video where Alan Moore recommends reading terrible books. Knowing what frustrates me in years of poorly presented university textbooks helps me in a way.

A buddhist monk recommends reading D-tier detective books to drill patience and contemplation for others.

Quite the exercise it is.

Re: Ask HN: How to get better at writing?

#18
Some things that have helped me:

- grammarly (mostly excellent, I ignore some suggestions)

- reading books more with stylistic elements that push the boundaries of what you're used to. I write technical blogs, but I've found some inspiration reading very different writing. Some examples are Thomas Pynchon, James Joyce, Greg Egan

- setting up constraints. Can you explain this in less sentences without making a long run-on sentence? How concise can you make this whole post? On the flipside, can you avoid all the most common adjectives when describing something? If you take a tokenized word count on your work, what words do you rely on? Can you delete them?

Re: Ask HN: How to get better at writing?

#19
Having people read your writing who can give constructive criticism can be a huge help.

It can be people you know, but there are also online writing communities that will give candid feedback in a safe environment. Usually the catch is you’ll have to return the favor for someone else in the community, but that’s not a bad thing.

Re: Ask HN: How to get better at writing?

#20
1. Read the Elements of Style by E.B. White. It describes how to write in active voice for positive effect.

2. Practice converting your thoughts to the written word so that they're clearly understood by anyone. That is the exercise at hand and it takes practice.

3. Once you've mastered clearly communicating your ideas, add some cleverness to your writing. Use double-entendre and practice economy of words. Leave something for the reader to guess, allowing one's imagination to fill the gaps with what you didn't say.

4. Finally, practice the art of showing versus telling, i.e., the art of story-telling versus an analytical accounting of facts.

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