This is password protected, so then an attacker must crack the password. The author exchanges the password over a phone call, which requires the password to be relatively weak, meaning the password is probably crackable. Exchanging the password via a second channel that the other user can copy and paste a more difficult password from to decyrpt the document might be more secure. The password may be more exposed, but…
Over the phone I could tell someone: "the password is the first 28 words of Psalm 23 from the King James Version." Would that be a weak password?
Psalms23:2
and have a 14 word passphrase.