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> The whole description is wordy I for one really enjoyed reading this story, it was quite exciting and I never noticed anything 'wordy' about it. I thought it was very well written.
I meant it as a relatively neutral descriptor. In modern day and age, this would frequently be shared as a 20word phrase on tranquil image background on Facebook. Compared to that, this is "wordy" - which some of us will enjoy (I did too:), others will not.
You've basically redefined the word so that it no longer has any meaning.