Earlier quoted context omitted.
The controversy here is specifically around Stochastic Parrots, by among others Timnit Gebru and "Schmargaret Smitchell". Timnit had recently been fired by Google for a controversy that started when leadership prevented her and Margaret from being coauthors on the paper (which is critical of Google in some ways) and Mitchell was fired a few months later. Google[0] claims the paper didn't meet the bar for publication…
> There was an attempt by the authors to respond to the internal criticism, but this wasn't met constructively. Really? Because people claiming to be the reviewers at the time said that the version they reviewed was a lot worse than the final version published much later. (And that version wasn't too great either.)
The internal special topics review process that wasn't formalized at the time but was pseudo-formalized later in response to this issue also supposedly allowed revision, but in practice this authors weren't given the opportunity to respond to the feedback, they were only give the option to remove their names from the paper.
So both your statement and mine can be true, as their were multiple reviewers in multiple review processes. To further disambiguate, the FAccT reviewers have noted that the paper improved during the academic peer review process. This is likely true. But that's wholly irrelevant to the line of discussion I was having, because that criticism wasn't "internal", and we can be sure it wasn't relevant because we know the internal reviewers have never identified themselves or made comment on the internal review process.
I recognize that this is complicated, and it doesn't help that afaict, Google has tried to blur the lines between their process and the normal academic peer review process.