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"We were somewhere around Barstow on the edge of the desert when the drugs began to take hold."

We read fear and loathing to each other in a tent hunkered down in a 48hr long storm in Iceland. I don't think I've laughed as hard since. What a blinder of a novel.

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Earlier quoted context omitted.

I don't know, I couldn't get through a chapter of Anna Karenina but it's still a great opening line. “Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.”

Keep going. It’s an amazing story.

Cor yeh, requires some staying power but what an amazing, life changing read.

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Surely: "It was the day my grandmother exploded" warrants a mention..

Iain Banks? Pretty sure it is, can’t remember the title…

Yeh, The Crow Road. I met him once working a book signing. He was brilliant, incredibly down to earth, very very funny and an all round good bloke. His books have kept me enthralled, especially Dead Air and Complicity. Helluva read.

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The dead speak! The galaxy has heard a mysterious broadcast, a threat of REVENGE in the sinister voice of the late EMPEROR PALPATINE.

(I don't actually think this is good writing)

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Does anyone know of a book wherein the last line is the same as the first? In the sense of making the book self-referencing? Something along the lines of, “And so it is with you.”

I like those kind of echoes. Edvard Grieg has two piano pieces, one from the very beginning of his publication history, one from near the end, and both have the same musical theme. The first piece is a simple one-pager, and the third is a waltz that modulates through several keys, almost as if traveling through memories.

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See also https://www.bulwer-lytton.com/ Since 1982 the Bulwer Lytton Fiction Contest has challenged participants to write an atrocious opening sentence to the worst novel never written. The whimsical literary competition honors Sir Edward George Bulwer-Lytton, whose 1830 novel Paul Clifford begins with “It was a dark and stormy night.”

And, of course, the Lyttle Lytton contest, for those who want less meanderingly-bad and more cleverly-bad. Or inappropriate sexual imagery bad.

http://adamcadre.ac/lyttle.html

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What makes a great opening line? A great rest-of-the-story. Nobody praises the opening line of a story that they otherwise think is rather boring.

I don't know, I couldn't get through a chapter of Anna Karenina but it's still a great opening line. “Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.”

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anna_Karenina_principle
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