That's a pretty big wall of text when most recruiters reach out with a single sentence or few sentences.
I also have found through experimentation that posting one liners like "how much?" just results in the recruiter reverting to their own script of "objection handlers"
The size and clarity of the message really does say "this isn't a conversation", "no bullshit" and "let's not fuck around here"
This is my own experience though. I've been running with it and refining for about 6 months to a year. Maybe It could be better. :)