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Scala and Kotlin tried to be a better Java (i.e. Algol-esque syntax). Clojure tries to be a better Lisp, an entirely different family of language. Though a good flamewar can be had on 1) Is Scala closer to Pascal 2) Is Pascal Algol-descendant
Clojure tries to be an immutable-data, copy-on-write, threadsafe by default dialect of Lisp, which none of the other Lisps do.
Your other points are good ones, I just don’t want people to be put off by copy-on-write performance assumptions. You take a ~50% performance hit from choosing Clojure over Java, but the gains in dev speed, maintenance, robustness, and flexibility to changing requirements are supposed to outweigh that. Especially when you include simpler parallelization, which you covered with thread safety.