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Re: How to Start a Novel

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Trying to think of a catchy or clever novel opener can be a major discouragement from just getting the pen to the paper and formulating that first paragraph. It can be much easier to start your writing a bit further in, where you have a rough idea of a scene, and letting the characters and the action work themselves. In fact, this is a good way to create bridges through tricky parts, where you know the current scene,…

reminded me of this great piece of writing advice from Simpsons writer John Swartzwelder:

" I do have a trick that makes things easier for me. Since writing is very hard and rewriting is comparatively easy and rather fun, I always write my scripts all the way through as fast as I can, the first day, if possible, putting in crap jokes and pattern dialogue—“Homer, I don’t want you to do that.” “Then I won’t do it.” Then the next day, when I get up, the script’s been written. It’s lousy, but it’s a script. The hard part is done. It’s like a crappy little elf has snuck into my office and badly done all my work for me, and then left with a tip of his crappy hat. All I have to do from that point on is fix it. So I’ve taken a very hard job, writing, and turned it into an easy one, rewriting, overnight. I advise all writers to do their scripts and other writing this way. And be sure to send me a small royalty every time you do it."

Re: How to Start a Novel

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Many years later, as he faced the firing squad, Colonel Aureliano Buendía was to remember that distant afternoon when his father took him to discover ice Gabriel Garcia Marquez's opening line from One Hundred years of Solitude was enough for me to pick up the book. Personally, I feel that this is one of the best openings of any book I've read.

Maybe it is from all the years I have spent trying to trim my overly verbose writing, but "was to remember" grates on me as a needlessly inflated way of saying "remembered."

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Re: How to Start a Novel

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post #42

My extended family owns an old country house with loads of fiction books, a fair bit of it genre fiction from the 50s and 60s. We have a great game that we play when we go up there with friends, a bit like the Dictionary game / Balderdash . Everyone peruses the shelves a picks out a promising book. Then, one round at a time, someone gives the title of their book, reads the back, and maybe reads a few choice paragraph…

Neat game. I have a board game, whose name escapes me at the moment. Instead of books, players receive cards, and tell stories about the cards, the player whose turn it is tells a story about their card, and then others hand them a card that they think matches the story, and then everyone has to guess whose card is the player's. If everyone guesses, player gets no points and everyone else 2. If no-one guess, player gets no points either. But if at least 1 person guesses, players gets 2 points, and thoseguessed correctly and who produced cards that other people guessed can get points too.

Re: How to Start a Novel

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Many years later, as he faced the firing squad, Colonel Aureliano Buendía was to remember that distant afternoon when his father took him to discover ice Gabriel Garcia Marquez's opening line from One Hundred years of Solitude was enough for me to pick up the book. Personally, I feel that this is one of the best openings of any book I've read.

I love this opening and it’s one I think about more than I should. I recently read his Chronicle of a Death Foretold and it’s opening felt drawn from this one.

Toni Morrison’s Beloved opening is breathtaking as well.

Re: How to Start a Novel

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post #42

My extended family owns an old country house with loads of fiction books, a fair bit of it genre fiction from the 50s and 60s. We have a great game that we play when we go up there with friends, a bit like the Dictionary game / Balderdash . Everyone peruses the shelves a picks out a promising book. Then, one round at a time, someone gives the title of their book, reads the back, and maybe reads a few choice paragraph…

Neat game. I have a board game, whose name escapes me at the moment. Instead of books, players receive cards, and tell stories about the cards, the player whose turn it is tells a story about their card, and then others hand them a card that they think matches the story, and then everyone has to guess whose card is the player's. If everyone guesses, player gets no points and everyone else 2. If no-one guess, player g…

This sounds fun! Can you please reply with the name of the game?

Re: How to Start a Novel

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There was this character of an aspiring, wanna-be writer in "Plague" (by A. Camus), named Joseph Grand, who obsesses over the first sentence of his novel. He'd keep on rewriting it infinitely, never getting beyond it. "Perfection spells p-a-r-a-l-y-s-i-s", as the man said (Churchill, if I'm not mistaken). For what it's worth, I considered quoting Plague's first sentence here (if it were somehow fitting or interesting…

The Plague's opening is very prosaic, since that's sort of the voice and the point, that even extraordinary events are meaningless except in the importance we attach to them personally.

The opening of The Stranger is much more grabby and also revealing for the narration. It has also presented something of a challenge for translators. I like Matthew Ward's "Maman died today." It's accurate, and neatly shows that infantile quality that Meursault's internal narration has.

Re: How to Start a Novel

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post #42

My extended family owns an old country house with loads of fiction books, a fair bit of it genre fiction from the 50s and 60s. We have a great game that we play when we go up there with friends, a bit like the Dictionary game / Balderdash . Everyone peruses the shelves a picks out a promising book. Then, one round at a time, someone gives the title of their book, reads the back, and maybe reads a few choice paragraph…

Gosh this is the most New England blue blood story I have ever heard and now I want to be in your family.

Re: How to Start a Novel

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Reminds me of a post [0] where someone shared potential novel opening lines that had been generated by GPT-2.

So many of them are interesting and/or hilarious. A few of my favorites:

I am forced to write to my neighbors about the beast.

I was playing with my dog, Mark the brown labrador, and I had forgotten that I was also playing with a dead man.

I wish someone would make a novel out of these!

[0]: https://aiweirdness.com/post/189170306297/how-to-begin-a-nov...

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