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The trouble with Burton isn't inaccuracy so much as unreadability , or at least clumsiness , because he translated into an idiosyncratic variety of English never used by anyone else before or since. Here's an example from the introduction to Dawood's translation, which I happen to have handy: "But she rejoined by saying, 'Allah upon you both that ye come down forthright, and if you come not, I will rouse upon you my…
English is my second language and I find his translation (and the fragment you quoted) clear, interesting and poetic. Reminds of King James Bible translation, which I also greatly enjoy.
There's (obviously) absolutely nothing with liking deliberately archaic, slightly high-flown language. Personally I find it rather annoying in Burton but like it in the KJV, but different people have different tastes.
Though ... A lot of people who read the KJV are doing so not so much for the enjoyment of its literary style, but because they believe it to be the Word of God; unfortunately this means that many people are seeking divine enlightenment from a translation that (1) in many cases they don't understand well just because its language is hundreds of years separated from what they're accustomed to speaking and reading, and that (2) is based on now-outdated textual scholarship and therefore does a suboptimal job of reporting what the allegedly divinely inspired writers actually wrote. That seems unfortunate.