(you) > There is basically no argumentation happening here and most statements are just thrown out as truths. Yes, it might be quick and easy to read through, but it's not very good writing.
After reading this I would expect a solid argument from you that "it's not very good writing" because "There is basically no argumentation happening" and "most statements are just thrown out as truths".
(you) > Notice how he's arguing against
So... is argumentation happening or not?
(pg) > When you write in a fancy way to impress people, you're making them do extra work just so you can seem cool.
(you) > Notice how he's arguing against "write in a fancy way to impress people" and not "write in a fancy way".
He is definitely taking for granted here that everyone who is writing in a "fancy way" is doing so to impress people. At the very least, he seems to be suggesting that this is often the case. There is no question whatsoever though, that this is happening at least some of the time.
(you) > Most authors write in a "fancy" way to invoke a feeling in the reader. They don't add random words to "seem cool"
"Most"? According to what? Do you have anything more to support this assertion than he had to support his? Are you really in a position to be critiquing him about this?
(pg) > It's too much to hope that writing could ever be pure ideas. You might not even want it to be. But for most writers, most of the time, that's the goal to aim for. The gap between most writing and pure ideas is not filled with poetry.
(you) > What is evening happening in this paragraph? First he's questioning whether it's possible for "writing to ever be pure ideas" without explaining what that's even supposed to mean.
There's a fair amount of implicit logic here, but i'd say the general idea is something along the lines of:
- The purpose of writing (for "most writers, most of the time") is to communicate ideas.
- Care ought to be taken in preventing the medium (text) from inhibiting this communication.
- Simple writing can be understood by a more broad audience
- Therefore, simple writing will help these writers towards their end of communicating these ideas to a broader audience
(you) > Then he says that most people aim for that.
No, he said "for most writers, most of the time, that's the goal to aim for". He is saying that they ought to be aiming for that. If they already were doing so, then it would go without saying.
(you) > And somehow the solution is "not filled with poetry"
Again, I think you are misunderstanding what he is trying to say. Building on my previous explanation, I'd say he is contrasting his ideal of simple writing with poetry, which is often cryptic.
Circling back to my initial statement, I'd suggest you worry about your own arguments before criticizing those of others.