The author has perhaps overlooked CAP theorem. Consciousness requires both consistency and high-availability, thus it can't arise in situations of partitioned networks. Brains (or, at least, most healthy brains) are unpartitioned. But any given community of brains is at best intermittently connected: I wave to my neighbour, then my neighbour disappears from sight. I call my parents on the phone, then the phonecall te…
Where do you get the idea that consistency is necessary? I certainly think it’s not.
How do you explain split-brain phenomena if consistency is not required? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Split-brain