The main phrase:
Start Simplifying Rent™ in the RentPost Cloud
If you make the lady at my leasing office read this, she will be like 'What????'
Connect with tenants effortlessly
I don't think the landlord wants to connect with the tenant. He is interested in collecting rent.
"We're just getting warmed up; get on the bandwagon."
Why should I care that you are warming up?
You don't want to invest in yesterday's technology.
I don't care about technology, I care about how you can solve my problems.
We want to work with you to continue to build RentPost to best fit your needs; we listen!
So you are suggesting that RentPost may not fit my needs.
I think you are in the same market as this software:
Look at their website. It's not pretty like yours, but the website copy is all about the customer's needs/problems.
E.g.
Find out who's late paying your rents in seconds.
Over 100 reports at your fingertips for you to analyze how your properties are doing within seconds.
Good luck.