Earlier quoted context omitted.
Let me try to rephrase this in a simpler way: This is even more troubling because smart people are less likely to be caught. At least, like Snowden's leaks, this is proof that privacy extremists aren't conspiracy nuts, and hopefully it will open a few eyes to the real danger of giving up privacy. Other comments are right: stop using big words and write plain sentences.
You removed some of the most important parts. The word "engineer" is critical to the first sentence, and your version has no translation of "banal, lascivious panopticon". The roundabout structure of the sentences is much more relevant than the use of a big word or two.
I removed "engineer" because it's not necessary to the broader premise that more highly skilled people tend to be both more trusted in our society and more likely to know how to get away with a crime.
I didn't translate "banal, lascivious panopticon" because it was it's one of those faux-profound images that adds very little.
It's hardly revelatory to tell HN readers that people are troublingly comfortable with constant tracking by corporations and governments.