Both pages would probably convert better if there was an explanation as to what happens when I put in my email address. There's also a confusing use over the word 'mailbox' - which I'd use for email, but also physical mail. The page asks for an email, immediately after saying "candy surprises in your mailbox" - if you assume no previous knowledge of what this site is going to offer, it's pretty confusing. And if it's…
From my experience, having less information on a landing page increases the email capture rate. Keep it simple with a single message all above the fold and it can improve the conversion rate by over 50%. At the same time, it doesn't make a difference either way in actual sales. At least nothing big enough that can be measured with significance. In the end, landing page optimization matters less than most people expec…
I definitely disagree that landing pages make no difference to sales and LP optimisation matters "less than most people expect". I think that wholly depends on the product (or goal) and the acquisition strategy.