See what I did there? Despite the good intention, no, because you're trying to explain lisp using lisp. If I knew lisp, I wouldnt need you to explain what code-as-data means. Maybe it's time for a different strategy. As a matter of fact, I've tried to explain code-as-data using OOP just this morning: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=16389514
Your linked comment is great but it sweeps one thing under the rug. There is a reason lisp didn't win. We put up with it (I use emacs, so I have to write it at times) but in general it's harder to reason about transformable lists of code than it is about plain old objects and their methods. Almost every problem elegantly solved in lisp has a parallel elegant solution in Ruby (using blocks, dynamic method definition,…
I would say it's more fundamental, simply a large majority find it difficult to interpret and reason about trees, rather than sequential operations.