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Re: I’m a freelance copywriter

#31

If you want a general term for this sort of thing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/StretchText . (The original note describing the concept: http://i.imgur.com/jOCOQGI.png )

Here's a long-term AI/ML goal - interpolate between Simple Wikipedia and regular Wikipedia article on the same topic and use StretchText to allow the reader to decide their level of depth.

Re: I’m a freelance copywriter

#32
Trifling bug report (but in this sort of thing it's worth getting the details right): one of the versions has "fewawards" instead of "few awards".

[EDITED to add:] Er, I was assuming that this was posted by the person who wrote it and that the latter is therefore reading this. But it looks like it wasn't, so maybe he isn't.

Re: I’m a freelance copywriter

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post #21

Fascinating and educational to see all those variations! Reminds me a little of 99 Ways to Tell a Story by Matt Madden: http://mattmadden.com/comics/99x/

I haven't read 99 Ways to Tell a Story, but when I read Raymond Queneau's Exercises in Style about a decade ago (in English translation) I was delighted by it. Though I have not reread the book recently, 2008-me would heartily recommend it.

I've noticed that exercises in style (in writing or in visual art, comics, video games and what have you) and practices like constrained writing and their analogues in other media seem to resonate with a certain type of computer/math nerd. It affects even those who would rather not associate with anything described as "literary". I think being a nerd predisposes one towards enjoying a kind of formalism in art.

Re: I’m a freelance copywriter

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post #20

He should change the description from "hard sell" to "hard on the eyes."

Check out http://lingscars.com . It will desensitise you.

thanks. tremendous car rental site. or whatever it is Ling does with cars. not sure.

when i viewed the page, the audio soundtrack was a rendition of Ob-La-Di, Ob-La-Da by the Beatles. maybe a better choice would be Helter Skelter.

Re: I’m a freelance copywriter

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post #9

Perfect example of a clever functional component to convey your business / sell yourself. One usability note: I would turn 'less / more hard sell' either side of the slider into links that move it forward/back as keeping my mouse pressed down on the slider reading through all the options was a little cumbersome.

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Re: I’m a freelance copywriter

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post #31

If you want a general term for this sort of thing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/StretchText . (The original note describing the concept: http://i.imgur.com/jOCOQGI.png )

Here's a long-term AI/ML goal - interpolate between Simple Wikipedia and regular Wikipedia article on the same topic and use StretchText to allow the reader to decide their level of depth.

Oh how I wish every math article on Wikipedia had this feature.

Re: I’m a freelance copywriter

#38

If you want a general term for this sort of thing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/StretchText . (The original note describing the concept: http://i.imgur.com/jOCOQGI.png )

That image is an absolutely fascinating historical artifact. He's describing (in a related paper) the essence of web sites in detail in 1965.

It's difficult to even imagine how few people were thinking of such things when they were so far removed everyday life and culture.

Tim Berners-Lee I thought was much more well known for starting a revolution with the world wide web. I hate to say but the web seems a bit less of an insight when you know that Hypertext had already been so well established for almost 25 years.

https://wikipedia.org/wiki/Ted_Nelson

Re: I’m a freelance copywriter

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If you want a general term for this sort of thing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/StretchText . (The original note describing the concept: http://i.imgur.com/jOCOQGI.png )

That image is an absolutely fascinating historical artifact. He's describing (in a related paper) the essence of web sites in detail in 1965 . It's difficult to even imagine how few people were thinking of such things when they were so far removed everyday life and culture. Tim Berners-Lee I thought was much more well known for starting a revolution with the world wide web. I hate to say but the web seems a bit less…

I'm surprised that anyone could believe it required insight. Having lived through that period, nothing about it seemed insightful or surprising at the time. The only time I remember being surprised was when I saw a UPS truck with their URL painted on the side, in 1993. I remember thinking it was a couple of years ahead of time.

Re: I’m a freelance copywriter

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post #32

Trifling bug report (but in this sort of thing it's worth getting the details right): one of the versions has "fewawards" instead of "few awards". [EDITED to add:] Er, I was assuming that this was posted by the person who wrote it and that the latter is therefore reading this. But it looks like it wasn't, so maybe he isn't.

Call him and let him know.
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