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Re: How to begin a text

#21
Really: just write, then revise. Nothing special about the beginning. What hung me up as a writer for much of my life was not realizing I should get a rough draft down instead of editing as I wrote.

Re: How to begin a text

#22

Earlier quoted context omitted.

I've heard lots of people say that, but it almost always just means the pan isn't hot enough! Wait an extra minute and the first one will usually be fine. I'm not sure how that translates back to writing, though...

Hand under running kitchen sink. Shake on frying pan If droplets wiggle and bounce -> pan hot enough.

Just be sure to do that before adding oil to the pan!

(I know you know that...)

Re: How to begin a text

#23
post #4

It's like making pancakes. The first pancake is always going to suck. Just accept it and get through it so you can make a great batch of pancakes, or blog posts, or products, or...

I first heard this expression in Russian, "первый блин комом", is it actually used in English as well? Interestingly, Google actually translates this to "better luck next time" instead of "the first pancake will be a lump/clod"

We do use "better luck next time," so perhaps the translator is trying to be idiomatic.

Re: How to begin a text

#24

Something similar works when coding too: begin with ugly code that only solves a simple case. Then keep iterating and refactoring until it is good. Trying to get it right from the beginning just means you don't get started.

Absolutely. Writing bad code is a great way to put yourself on the path to writing better code -- as long as you have the 'always refactor' mindset.

Re: How to begin a text

#25

Earlier quoted context omitted.

I've heard lots of people say that, but it almost always just means the pan isn't hot enough! Wait an extra minute and the first one will usually be fine. I'm not sure how that translates back to writing, though...

Hand under running kitchen sink. Shake on frying pan If droplets wiggle and bounce -> pan hot enough.

(The Leidenfrost effect (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Leidenfrost_effect))

Re: How to begin a text

#26
Summary: "just start typing. ... delete until the first sentence is suitable to begin the text."

That's a useful training aid, but shouldn't be necessary every time. After a few tries, starting an essay or post should be automatic. Writing a coherent essay is usually taught in high school. Strunk's classic "The Elements of Style" remains useful.

This problem afflicts some how-to videos. Starting with "Hi, how are you" in a one-way medium is pointless. How-to material should start with what you're going to do, go on to how to do it, and end with a recap of what you did.

Always engage brain before putting mouth in gear.

Re: How to begin a text

#27

Earlier quoted context omitted.

I've heard lots of people say that, but it almost always just means the pan isn't hot enough! Wait an extra minute and the first one will usually be fine. I'm not sure how that translates back to writing, though...

I pride myself on my pancake-making ability, and I completely agree with you: The pan is usually not hot enough. What I like to do is use Kerrygold butter, turn the heat on the burner higher than it should be, and wait until just before the butter starts to burn. Remove the pan from the heat, turn the burner down, and put your first batch in the pan. Also, make note of the temperature settings you use for next time.…

I bought a infrared thermometer as a gadget, and have found it to be invaluable for cooking.

Re: How to begin a text

#29
This tangles up a few seemingly related questions:

1. "How to begin writing a text." How do you get yourself going so you aren't stuck on a blank page?

2. "How to write the beginning of a text." What is the process you take to determine the first sentence of a piece of writing?

3. "How to begin a text." After you've gone through that process, what kind of opening sentence should you end up with?

The suggestion to just delete the first couple of sentences is an OK one. I think the important part is that it helps solve the first problem—how to get moving at all so you are past the blank page. And the key insight is to realize that everything is still mutable. Writing is not committing. Editing isn't either, for that matter. Only publishing is. Until then, it's all unfired clay and you can play with it to your heart's content.

I think deleting the first couple of sentences is a moderately OK suggestion for the second one. Deleting any sentences that don't carry weight is always a good thing, and the first few are likely to be unuseful. But there's a good change that the next few sentences need work too. In a first draft, every line is suspect.

I don't think the article tells you much about what a good first sentence looks like. I don't necessarily think it needs to have "useful content". When I write, especially for the web where attention spans are measured in nanoseconds, the entire goal of my first sentence is to get you to read the first paragraph. The goal of the first paragraph is to get you to read the first section. Then I start getting to the meat of the piece.

Often that means the first sentence is a hook. It may be deliberately emotional to get you excited about continuing to read. Or it may raise a question you want answered or claim to teach you something you want to know. Sometimes I just try to use interesting enough language or imagery to get you excited about the pure joy of reading.

Once I've done that, I've got a little more slack, a little more of your good faith, that I can then use to draw you through the rest of the work. If I'm trying to do something like explain how a garbage collector works, or describe a feature of a programming language you've never heard of, I need that initial burst of interest to get you to keep moving.

Then it's up to me to make the rest of the piece satisfying enough to be glad that I sucked you in.

Re: How to begin a text

#30

I agree, somewhat. It's also a question of how one approaches writing: pansing vs plotting. Some authors, like Stephen King, swear by pansing and begin by forcing themselves to produce a certain number or words; whether it starts with character development or the plot, they exercise their powers of putting words on paper. Some authors, like J.K. Rowling, take a different approach and begin with sketching, diagraming,…

I'm sorry, "pansing"? Is that a typo?
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