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I'm a designer, programmer, an entrepreneur (meaning, I've started plenty of stuff), but I'm coming to terms with the fact that I might suck at marketing and getting the actual word out.
Can you give me feedback on my startup's homepage and copy? Any suggestions on how I can better get the word out?
I've got a couple of remarks about the video :
- I'm not sure that drum'n'bass is the right kind of music
- You should stare at the camera instead of talking to your interviewer
- You don't seem to be convinced by what you're saying. You have to sound more active.
Finally, concerning the pricing options, privacy is not a commodity, ssl should be available for every plans.
The video also feeds a bit "meh" i'm afraid. "Meaningful Discussion" in groups is beginning to sound very cliched.
You don't look at the camera even once during the whole video. It really bothers me and reminds me of when I'm talking to a blind person and they can't make eye contact with me because they can't see me.
I like a lot of it, but at the same time, much of it feels it's been taken (not improved upon) from the 37Signals book of design. From the sign up, to the various pricing options, the way the pricing options is arranged, through to the buttons across the site. The video also feeds a bit "meh" i'm afraid. "Meaningful Discussion" in groups is beginning to sound very cliched.
thanks for the feedback on the video, if you have any ideas on how I can make it better, that'd be great