"I think most of us, including my math-phobic Facebook friends, would find the second version easier to follow and understand." I guess I'm in the minority. I preferred the words (though the translation was a bit ungainly).
I'd say the problem with math notation is that it simply has too many symbols. It has a different symbol for everything because it was designed as a handwritten system. For you mathematicians, think what you would do if you woke up tomorrow and all the math symbols had been replaced with emoji? I think most normal people would just learn the four operators and that's all... you know: megaphone, pizza slice, backpack,…
Maybe the problem is that "untypeable" symbols should be easier to type. Mathematicians get by just fine with their typesetting system. Maybe the problem is that programmers are constrained by ASCII, and mathematicians have the upper hand because they have the freedom to define their own notation.
Maybe the "problem" is a matter of perspective.