Earlier quoted context omitted.
I think the primary objection is that to the vast majority of people 'plummet' implies the satellite is suddenly and violently falling from the sky - it's the kind of word people would describe an airplane crash with. However unless the author happens to know a lot about orbital mechanics (or they've played Kerbal Space Program) they probably just picked an expressive word for the sake of a compelling article rather…
It's a dumb objection. A mission manager was quoted using the word "diving". It isn't the journalist but the nitpicking commentors who are clueless. The headline accurately enough conveys what is happening and the article articulates it well. Orbital mechanics isn't intuitive enough for there to be perfect fit words given human experience, human timescales, "plummet" is fine.
Plummet:
1. to fall perpendicularly
2. to drop sharply and abruptly
Or, Google's scraped definition from Oxford dictionary: fall or drop straight down at high speed.
If you google "satellite plummeting", you'll notice that almost all of the results also include "fireball", "burning up" and/or "reentry".